Karen Anglesey Poet Limerick

Jive In a Beehive

Doing the jive in a beehive
Can be detrimental to your life
Performing high kicks
With pointy toed flicks
Will cause the bees to sting your behind
 
 
 
 
07/08/13   Heather's "Make Me Laugh"  Contest

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Robin Davis October 22, 2013 at 4:06 PM This is a clever and humorous write. I can just picture a tiny person trying to dance in a hive. Nice job Thanks for the awesome comment on my Habits poem. Glad you enjoyed it. Karen Anglesey October 22, 2013 at 4:27 PM Thank you for commenting. Glad you found the humor

Kelly Deschler September 30, 2013 at 3:51 PM Sweet as honey! This was very fun and whimsical, and it put a smile on my face today! Great work, Karen!...Thank you for the kind comments, once again! Karen Anglesey September 30, 2013 at 4:21 PM Kelly, glad you enjoyed this. Thank you :)

Terry O'Leary September 7, 2013 at 7:58 AM Funny limerick... great stuff... Terry Karen Anglesey September 7, 2013 at 9:36 AM Hi Terry, thank you for stopping by. :)

John Posey August 29, 2013 at 1:51 PM I'm so captivated by your writing that I didn't notice your straying from the rhyming pattern.... I found the humor over came the unintentional and resulted in a great little chuckle.... Love ya dearly.... Jake Karen Anglesey August 29, 2013 at 2:36 PM I think I'll say away from limericks. It was fun to try it once though. Thankyou :)

Aiden Asoll August 23, 2013 at 3:44 AM Fun, simple, straight to the point and you can't ignore that metaphor, nice poem. Karen Anglesey August 23, 2013 at 6:36 AM Ha ha ... wouldn't ignore being stung on the behind for sure...thank you for reading :)

Just That Archaic Poet August 22, 2013 at 7:59 AM This piece made me tee-hee. Cute, clever; very fun piece to read :) Karen Anglesey August 22, 2013 at 8:10 AM I'm glad you had some fun with it :)

Sandra Adams August 19, 2013 at 6:06 AM lol...adored this one...most the summers wasps sunbathed on my car and I tried everything to dodge them when entering my car... I am glad they didn't sting my behind :) Karen Anglesey August 19, 2013 at 6:24 AM Just doing a stab at a limerick. Glad you found it funny. Thank you :)

Jon A Cavanaugh August 11, 2013 at 1:39 PM Love this poem with the surprise ending. Thanks for putting a smile in my heart and giving me a good belly laugh. Karen Anglesey August 19, 2013 at 6:25 AM Jon, thank you for commenting and finding a smile. :)

Eileen Manassian August 9, 2013 at 7:15 AM HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA! Karen....I'll keep that in mind! How cute and funny! HUGS!!!!! Karen Anglesey August 9, 2013 at 8:14 AM Eileen, thank you ... hugs back to you :)

Milton Toran August 3, 2013 at 5:54 PM Hee Hee! Got a kick out of this one! Or shall I say a "sting?" LOL!! Cleverly written!...Milt Karen Anglesey August 9, 2013 at 8:13 AM Milt, thankyou for getting a laugh from my silly rhyme :)

Justin Bordner August 1, 2013 at 3:02 PM Better to be stung than to be hung without fun - I absolutely adore bumble bees karen, hence this clever write is a tastey joy for me, and the moral is appealing as well - J.A.B. % Karen Anglesey August 1, 2013 at 3:27 PM Justin, thank you for apprciatin my stab a limericks

Don Johnson August 1, 2013 at 12:15 AM and ya no ya alive....love it babe Karen Anglesey August 1, 2013 at 6:37 AM Don, ha ha and thank you :)

Richard Lamoureux July 29, 2013 at 6:06 PM I think I will pass on that kind of dancing *lol* Thanks for a bit of afternoon humor. Karen Anglesey July 29, 2013 at 6:14 PM ha ha...try it you might like it ? Have a great afternoon:)

Lucilla Carrillo July 29, 2013 at 3:23 PM This is good and funny. Thanks for sharing and for reading my poem. Lucilla Karen Anglesey July 29, 2013 at 4:44 PM Lucilla thankyou very much :)

Debbie Duncan July 29, 2013 at 1:29 PM This is so very cute ;} Karen Anglesey July 29, 2013 at 2:52 PM Thank you Debbie, much appreciated... :)

Delysia Hendricks July 28, 2013 at 10:48 PM Ouch!!! Thanks for a belly laugh this morning. Good luck in the contest, Karen. Licia :-) Karen Anglesey July 29, 2013 at 10:27 AM Thank you very much :) Have a great day

Heather Secrest July 28, 2013 at 3:52 PM Funny!!! If i ever jive, it will not be in a beehive...Thanks for those words of wisdom!! -heather Karen Anglesey July 29, 2013 at 10:27 AM Thank you Heather ...much appreciated

Carrie Richards July 28, 2013 at 1:42 PM Who cannot smile upon reading this gem?? So cute !! Karen Anglesey July 28, 2013 at 3:28 PM Thank you for appreciating...:)

Len Gasun July 27, 2013 at 11:53 PM This is a fantastic limerick my dear friend, Karen. I love it and so enjoyed. It put smiles on my face. Thank you so much for sharing & your inspiring comments on my poem. Have a great day! love lots, Leonora Karen Anglesey July 28, 2013 at 9:43 AM Leonora, thank you for your lovely comments and for enjoying my silly little poem ...hugs to you :)

John Loving Iii July 27, 2013 at 11:13 PM Contesr? Sounds real. Karen Anglesey July 28, 2013 at 9:42 AM John, thank you ha ha :)

Cherie Thomas July 27, 2013 at 9:36 PM Lol you are Jive Talking....but I dig:) ..very cool poem karen!!! ...love it:0) ty4sharing....cherie Karen Anglesey July 27, 2013 at 9:40 PM Cherie, thank you very much ha ha :)

Jack Horne July 27, 2013 at 2:51 PM having another chuckle here - congrats on all your wins : ) Karen Anglesey July 27, 2013 at 2:57 PM jack, thank you for the acknowledgement. Much appreciated :)

John Posey July 26, 2013 at 6:57 PM LOL....Bees just wanna make honey... No jiving around in this hive... Great write, Karen.... Jake Karen Anglesey July 26, 2013 at 7:10 PM Jake, glad your found the humor. Silly is as silly does... :)

Stephen Kilmer July 26, 2013 at 6:43 PM Excellent! Very funny! Kilmer Karen Anglesey July 26, 2013 at 6:44 PM Stephen, thank you for finding the humor :)

Sara Kendrick July 25, 2013 at 5:27 AM Interesting work that you have penned..Don't want to be around those bees..Thanks for stopping by...Sara Karen Anglesey July 25, 2013 at 7:12 AM Sara, I came up with this being silly with the grandkids... thank you :)

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