Jingles

do not simply dawdle and diddle for life may pass as a twinkle hardly any time to drag and dawdle in life, joy and sorrow may mix and mingle before your powers diminish and dwindle, enjoy it wilful as a child cheerily toying with shingles for a change, play on the flute or fiddle and on your toes, twirl and twiddle or go for a walk with your funny, furry poodle or write a peaceful placid idyll, could even be a distrait doodle life that is a tricky and ticklish riddle is never a puddle for you to muddle but is to clasp, caress and cuddle let it ring with a jangle or jingle even when you are sickeningly single smile, showing your dented dimple as stars in the sky wink, blink and twinkle Sep.1.2022 First published in 2021 ~ Placed Second~ Alliteration- Old or New Poetry Contest Sponsor- Joseph May
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Alex Avatar
September 3, 2022 at 1:46 AM
Such a meaning-filled alliteration. Congratulations!
Fowler Avatar
September 2, 2022 at 9:42 AM
This is such a fun read Valsa - congratulations on your win! Linda
May Avatar
September 2, 2022 at 9:42 AM
Very nicely penned Valsa, Congrats on your win
Goldsmith Avatar
December 22, 2021 at 11:35 AM
Your "Jingles" is a cute/fun write. I really enjoyed it.  Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................
Pandit Avatar
December 3, 2021 at 3:06 AM
Happy sounds! Great advice, Valsa.
Buhagiar Avatar
December 3, 2021 at 2:23 AM
Almost a monorhyme. Loved the light verse., each line tumbling one after the other. You're a wonder.
Krutsinger Avatar
December 2, 2021 at 8:43 PM
This has such a jazzy rhythm to it; well penned Valsa.
George Avatar
December 2, 2021 at 10:15 PM
Very many thanks Caren for a series of lovely comments on my poems
Wolf Avatar
December 2, 2021 at 8:23 PM
Nice to see you having such fun with ye olde language, Valsa. I certainly have fun reading it. Keep smiling. :) gw
George Avatar
December 2, 2021 at 10:13 PM
Thank you so much Gershon... ! Glad you find it interesting !
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