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Jingles

do not simply dawdle and diddle for life may pass as a twinkle hardly any time to drag and dawdle in life, joy and sorrow may mix and mingle before your powers diminish and dwindle, enjoy it wilful as a child cheerily toying with shingles for a change, play on the flute or fiddle and on your toes, twirl and twiddle or go for a walk with your funny, furry poodle or write a peaceful placid idyll, could even be a distrait doodle life that is a tricky and ticklish riddle is never a puddle for you to muddle but is to clasp, caress and cuddle let it ring with a jangle or jingle even when you are sickeningly single smile, showing your dented dimple as stars in the sky wink, blink and twinkle Sep.1.2022 First published in 2021 ~ Placed Second~ Alliteration- Old or New Poetry Contest Sponsor- Joseph May

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Date: 9/3/2022 1:46:00 AM
Such a meaning-filled alliteration. Congratulations!
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Date: 9/2/2022 9:42:00 AM
Very nicely penned Valsa, Congrats on your win
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Date: 9/2/2022 9:42:00 AM
This is such a fun read Valsa - congratulations on your win! Linda
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Date: 12/22/2021 11:35:00 AM
Your "Jingles" is a cute/fun write. I really enjoyed it.  Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................
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Date: 12/3/2021 3:06:00 AM
Happy sounds! Great advice, Valsa.
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Date: 12/3/2021 2:23:00 AM
Almost a monorhyme. Loved the light verse., each line tumbling one after the other. You're a wonder.
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Date: 12/2/2021 8:43:00 PM
This has such a jazzy rhythm to it; well penned Valsa.
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Date: 12/2/2021 10:15:00 PM
Very many thanks Caren for a series of lovely comments on my poems
Date: 12/2/2021 8:23:00 PM
Nice to see you having such fun with ye olde language, Valsa. I certainly have fun reading it. Keep smiling. :) gw
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Valsa George
Date: 12/2/2021 10:13:00 PM
Thank you so much Gershon... ! Glad you find it interesting !

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