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After my young wife died tragically, I decided to move away Memories we made in our house were painful; I couldn’t stay I’d often remember that phone call from her doctor who’d said "John, you need to get here quickly" but I knew she was dead. I moved to West Virginia to the town of Harpers Ferry It was where she was born but now lay in the cemetery. I managed to find a small bungalow at the towns edge It was a neat little bungalow surrounded by a tall hedge. My job in financial security meant I could work remotely I just couldn't face explaining to people, and it suited me I was on the phone to a customer when I heard a loud bang Then just a couple of minutes later my front doorbell rang. I had just finished the call and went to answer the front door Probably a door-to-door salesman and under my breath swore I opened the door and a young boy with a cap stood before me He had a mischievous grin and said "Hi, my names Jimmy". I said, "Hi there young Jimmy, and what can I do for you?" Then I remembered the bang I'd heard and I kind of knew He said "My ball went over your fence into your backyard I think I heard something break, maybe I’d hit it too hard”. "Come inside" I said "Let's go and take a look out the back" And there was his ball by a garden statue with a big crack He picked up his ball and said "My dad will replace it" "It's only a cheap statue" I replied, "I'm not bothered one bit". He left and that evening his dad came around to see me And said "Welcome to town, I heard that you met Jimmy" "I did" I said "It was only a statue and accidents happen It was a hideous looking thing, probably gone out of fashion". He shook my hand and then handed me a bottle of whiskey And added, "We're having the neighbour's round for a party You're welcome to come and join us and to see who's who" I said, "I've got a few calls to make first but yes thanks I will do". Every minute of every day I’d often think of my dear wife Grief was still with me but I needed to move on with my life I had a shower then went next door and there to welcome me Was the boy with the cap and mischievous grin, young Jimmy. He said “Dad's cooking a barbecue and there's lots of cold beer" I'm sorry about your statue and I'm glad that you're here Come and say hello to my older sister, Sue in the blue frock" I followed him over and what he said to her left me in shock.  "This is our new neighbour, and he wants to date you" he said She looked at me uncomfortable and her face went bright red Jimmy walked off and looked back saying "I'm only kidding Sue" I stood there feeling a bit awkward and was unsure what to do. I looked at Sue and said, “Is Jimmy the joker in your family?” We then both burst out laughing realising it was just funny But as time went on Jimmy would often call to see me I'd take him fishing in the creek and cycling in the country. Jimmy was always joking, and he was like the son I never had Unknown to him he was helping my grief and for that I was glad I'd go to baseball games with his dad Bill along with Jimmy as well But I noticed he wasn't his usual self-something was off I could tell. A couple of weeks later Jimmy’s mom Pam called to see me She said "Jimmy's in hospital and they're running tests to see They've found a tumour, but I don't know if they can operate Hopefully, they'll be able to do something before it's too late”. One night I went in to see him he waved when I walked in I couldn't help but notice how he was so gaunt and thin But Jimmy's cheeky sense of humour was on fine display He said "My friend fancies you" as a nurse came our way. He'd drift in and out of sleep and was on a drip with morphine And it was just so pitiful to see him, and he was only thirteen Over the coming weeks I'd take it in turns with his family Just sitting and holding the hand of our beloved Jimmy. A week later I had a call from his dad that filled me with dread "John, please come quickly" but in my heart I knew he was dead I dashed to the hospital and all his family were all sat by his side Just ten minutes before I'd got there young Jimmy had died. At his funeral I got up to speak there were things I wanted to say "When I was grieving Jimmy helped me to chase that grief away He was always a cheerful soul , and he lived his life to the full With mischievous young Jimmy around our lives were never dull". His family honoured me by asking to help to carry his coffin out Heaven had gained itself another angel and of that I’ve no doubt As we walked out they played Jimmy’s favourite song by Eva Cassidy ‘Somewhere Over The Rainbow’ and I know that’s where he’ll be. Written on the 14th February 2025.

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Date: 4/3/2025 6:34:00 AM
So heart breaking write, Tom. Death is a hard part of life to experience, but some way we keep walking forward until time softens the pain. The pain really never goes away. Enjoyed reading my friend.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 4/3/2025 6:52:00 AM
Thank you very much Eve, we never know when tragedy will strike. You're right though the pain eases but never really goes. I hope you are keeping well. Tom
Date: 2/26/2025 9:23:00 AM
Tom such a heartfelt piece. With a great theme and story line. This one is a favorite. I loved how you scripted this story and including your grief in losing your Dear wife and then relating Jimmy's joking personality to uplift you and take you away from your grief. Sadly in the end it came back around as Jimmy passed bringing the grief back. The ending I also loved Eva Cassidy's," Somewhere Over The Rainbow." Was a great finish my friend. Your story telling abilities Tom resonate and are loved
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Date: 2/26/2025 10:06:00 AM
Thank you very much Michael, I'm happy you enjoyed it, I got the idea after seeing the picture and wanted to try and show that life can be challenging at times and tragedy can bring your world tumbling down. Thanks too for faving it. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
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Date: 2/26/2025 9:24:00 AM
by many Tom. You should consider writing a book and including all your short stories. I think it would be a great success. They are almost all uplifting and so much exciting to read my friend... A favorite...
Date: 2/25/2025 4:40:00 PM
Awww, Tom, you never fail, emotions provoked, I'm fine, and I hope you and yours are well . . .
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Date: 2/25/2025 9:33:00 PM
Thank you very much Indiana, tragedy can strike more than once, life can be so cruel at times. I'm glad you're ok, all good here. Tom
Date: 2/25/2025 11:12:00 AM
A smashing tear jerker, Tom (if a tear jerker can be smashing, that is). So many people get dealt a bum hand that you have to wonder who’s dealing the cards. A very belated birthday to you…. Did you manage to fit all 30 candles on the cake?
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Date: 2/25/2025 9:31:00 PM
Thank you very much Terry, life can be like that sometimes, everyone likes a happy ending but it's not always the case, thought about this when I was in Spain and finally got round to writhing it, thanks too for the birthday wishes, only one candle on the cake lol. Tom
Date: 2/20/2025 4:43:00 AM
Such a heart wrenching story Tom life can be so cruel at times, it certainly tests ones faith.
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Date: 2/20/2025 7:19:00 AM
Thank you very much John, we all want life to be joyful but tragedy can strike anytime, I agree, it can certainly test your faith and drive one to the edge. Greetings from the New Forest. Tom
Date: 2/20/2025 4:40:00 AM
Such a moving and beautiful write Tom! I am tear stained the morning. It's so hard to lose someone yet I agree with Kim below, the pain is worth every second of love and joy given to us! Happy Thursday!
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Date: 2/20/2025 7:22:00 AM
Thank you very much Mike, I think we can all identify with this one, life can turn in a second and bring tragedy when we're least expecting it. It's a lovely thing Kim is doing, bringing comfort to those who've suffered a heartbreaking loss. Tom
Date: 2/18/2025 5:38:00 AM
A sweet and sad write. As I am preparing to begin my first Griefshare along with another leader, this is especially poignant. Sometimes we have grief upon grief, but the loved ones are worth everything. Hugs ~ Kim
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Date: 2/18/2025 7:18:00 AM
Thank you very much Kim, that's a lovely thing you are doing, offering support to the bereaved, I know many struggle with grief. It's always sad for those left behind. Tom
Date: 2/17/2025 10:48:00 PM
Tom….that broke my heart and made me emotional…..what a beautiful story of love and loss…written from a beautiful kind sensitive heart! Just lovely my friend….Debx
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Date: 2/18/2025 2:11:00 AM
Thank you very much much Deb, sadly life isn't always rosey, but all we can do is carry on and make the best of it, greetings the New year. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
Date: 2/17/2025 10:30:00 PM
Couldn't reply earlier as I have computer problem. This poem broke my heart. I still remember my late wife. And now the problem of that young boy. Great poem with great rhyme and flow.
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Date: 2/18/2025 2:09:00 AM
Thank you very much Victor, I tried to show that life can take a twist for the worse sometimes, things don't always go our way. Hope you get your computer sorted, greetings from the New Forest. Tom
Date: 2/17/2025 7:49:00 PM
Tom…I read your poem and all the comments as well. The story has a beautiful symmetry and just the right amount of detail that defines a great piece of work. I see it’s your birthday…we’ve been lucky to lead lives into a respectable age. As you point out there’s no guarantee with a birth certificate. BTW, I particularly liked how jimmy was fixing you up with dates…there’s something special about his humor. More people should try it. Cheers and thanks for boosting my euphoria before bed! It’s a joy to read work like this! BTW Tom, what day is your actual birthday? Is it the 14th? Just curious! Smiles!!
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 2/18/2025 2:01:00 AM
Thank you very much Duke, life isn't always how we want it to be and we should always expect the unexpected at times, our lives can take a turn at the blink of an eye, we should never take things for granted, Feb 16th, had it been the 14th I might have been called Cupid lol. Tom
Date: 2/16/2025 7:59:00 PM
POTD... POTW... POTM... POTY... POTDecade... POTCentury!!!!!! Best poem I've ever read on this site. Congratulations, Tom. Wonderful!!!!
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Date: 2/16/2025 11:13:00 PM
Lol Thank you very much Gershon, I'm happy you enjoyed it. Sadly life can throw up many challenges that can sometimes push us to the limit. I know many never get over a tragedy, especially losing a child. I would certainly struggle. Tom
Date: 2/16/2025 12:25:00 PM
Belated happy birthday Tom. Would you be an Only child.? Or of later in life? Just a thought in passing.?? I note a goodness in you i guess? many others have it here too.? Maybe visible at some Times more than others.' Just a view.) I hope things stay good.. As we keep it real, or try.. We don't need such negativity, a dark world oft offers..Let's climb above dark clouds.' To hopes Bright blue sky.!
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 2/18/2025 2:06:00 AM
So sorry to hear that Joe, that's heartbreaking.
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Joe Maverick
Date: 2/17/2025 3:28:00 AM
Try this for size my aunts daughter age 6' had pioneering heart surgery in the 70s all was well..Her and her husband were advised to go And make some tea and relax a little..As it was early days in this field a nurse or junior doctor i think? Passed by my cousin anyway when heart surgery was done blood is drained from the heart then slowly Re introduced.' The whoever Turned the supply full on with good intention this flooded her heart and she died straight away.' Thats a Tough one to get through.)
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 2/16/2025 12:32:00 PM
Thank you very much for your birthday wishes Joe, I have a brother and sister. I agree, there are many good folk on here. We all hope for those blue skies and sunshine in our lives. I hope you are keeping well. Tom
Date: 2/16/2025 9:45:00 AM
Happy birthday to a great poet, You're poetry is fab and we all know it, Sometimes funny, sometimes sad, but if it's a poem of the day, we are glad! Hope this rhyme makes you smile, I'm proud of myself as it took a while :-)
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 2/16/2025 9:58:00 AM
Well thank you very much Lisa, I had a lovely day with my family.
Date: 2/16/2025 7:51:00 AM
Hi Tom, a resounding FAV. There were several people in my extended family who had cancer, some survived, some didn't. This poignant poem reminds me that some cancer patients die young. Beauteously penned. Have a lovely Sunday with family. Blessings.
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Date: 2/16/2025 7:57:00 AM
Thank you very much Regina, I too have had family members who died from cancer, it's a terrible disease. I tried to show that life isn't always plain sailing and that tragedy can strike at anytime. Thanks too for faving it. I hope you are keeping well, enjoy your weekend. Tom
Date: 2/16/2025 5:03:00 AM
Tom, such a beautiful and heartfelt story, a wonderfully penned emotive poem.
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Date: 2/16/2025 5:58:00 AM
Thank you very much Tania, sometimes life can be challenging, we never know what's around the corner. Tom
Date: 2/15/2025 8:58:00 PM
Dear Tom, once more you have displayed your story telling abilities. What a poignant and powerful narrative. Though I know this is fictional, you have narrated it in such a way that it looks a page from your life. You are able to keep the rhyme in such a long narrative and string together so many memories in a coherent unbroken sequence. Jimmy will live in the reader's heart for ever. Such a cute looking boy and the picture matches so well with the character you have delineated
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Date: 2/15/2025 10:26:00 PM
Thank you very much Valsa, I know many have suffered real heartbreaking events in their lives, I could have gone down a happier route but life isn't always like that. The picture inspired me and over the last couple of weeks created the story. Tom
Date: 2/15/2025 6:26:00 PM
Wow… I was hung on every word. So glad I could read this, Tom!!! Always, Laura
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Date: 2/15/2025 8:54:00 PM
Thank you very much Laura, we're never prepared when tragedy strikes, life can be like that sometimes. Tom
Date: 2/15/2025 6:16:00 PM
Yet another piece of charming and delightful work from Mr. Cunningham. POTD 4 b sure! Bravo!! =;o)
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Date: 2/15/2025 8:52:00 PM
Thank you very much Arlo, I'm happy you enjoyed it. Life can be like that sometimes.. Tom
Date: 2/15/2025 4:43:00 PM
Riveting story...and I love Eva Cassidy
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Date: 2/15/2025 8:51:00 PM
Thank you very much David, Eva was a very talented singer who left us too soon. I'm happy that you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 2/15/2025 3:54:00 PM
If this is. True story it is a wonderful tribute. Too bad there are not more Jimmy's in the world.
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Date: 2/15/2025 8:50:00 PM
Thank you very much Andrea, it was a fictional write, but life isn't always what we want it to be. I know heartbreaking tragedies strike us and it's something out of our control. Tom
Date: 2/15/2025 3:54:00 PM
Hello Tom Cunningham, oh such a sad tale. He will live in your heart. he was so young to pass. that is so sad. enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/
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Date: 2/16/2025 4:19:00 PM
Hello Tom, yes life can be cruel sometimes. we are never prepared for tragedy. I read a poem titled The Rainbow Bridge. It made me feel better. I am just grieving. Missing her. She was my fur baby. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/
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Date: 2/15/2025 8:47:00 PM
Thank you very much Darlene, I know we all experience tragedy sometimes and we're never prepared for it, life can be cruel at times. Hope you're ok. Tom
Date: 2/15/2025 3:54:00 PM
A beautiful story beautifully told. Please accept my condolences, Tom. I gather that writing this poem was very therapeutic. Take care.
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Date: 2/15/2025 8:45:00 PM
Thank you very much Jim, It is a fictional write, I wanted to show that life isn't always rosy for us and tragedy can strike at anytime. Tom
Date: 2/15/2025 3:27:00 PM
Brilliant storytelling Tom reminding us, all we have for sure is today, an extremely poignant poem, written with plain language that the reader understands, even if you don’t have all the answers, your message is one of kindness and humanity, cheers David
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 2/15/2025 8:41:00 PM
Thank you very much David, life can be very cruel at times, I think many of us have experienced tragedy at some point in our lives and there's nothing we can do. Tom
Date: 2/15/2025 12:45:00 PM
Tom! Youu are a great writer, and yes move us all with toching, fiction as here. Many hugs, you gifted one! Hope this becomes a POTD, Huggs Pangie xx.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 2/15/2025 5:28:00 PM
Feeling unwell this morniing but as my Mom would say, “ you ‘ll live!” LOL I guess mum was right, as I will be 85 very soon.. and I consider that a gift from God.. love, Pangie., Crossed fingers on this being a POTD! Yahoo.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 2/15/2025 1:20:00 PM
Thank you very much Pangie, I got the idea whilst I was away. Life isn't always a bed of roses and tragedy can creep up on us when we're not expecting it. Hope your weekend is going well. Tom
Date: 2/15/2025 12:06:00 PM
WOW!!! "You are an amazing storyteller." What a write/story you have here. Life comes with good, bad and sad times. Your work needs to be in books for all to enjoy. It is not hard to do. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away................
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 2/15/2025 12:29:00 PM
Thank you very much Paula, im happy you enjoyed the story. We all hope things go perfectly in life but sadly that's not the case. I'll do some research on it. Hope you have a lovely weekend. Tom
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