Jilted

A fugitive slice of moon was preparing to leave. From nothingness, tiny thoughts flew out like moths. I was watching the fall of night. The wisdom kills nowadays. Everyday a scandal breaks out. A child cries endlessly. I might say for a logic. Her mother had hanged herself from a ceiling fan. A celebrity enters the fluid world of pain talks to the visionary goddess. Impatience was coming to be. Grabs the wounds, does not talk, prepares for the funeral of human spirit and walks away with hawthorn. SATISH VERMA

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John Rhinem

Date: 9/3/2010 2:41:00 AM

Smile ~ "You" never seem to let myself down amid "Your Poes" for, no matter what the subject or topic of they, they are "Always" written amid the expressions of "A Souls Profound; Simply, 'BEAUTIFUL!!!'" ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You Always,' & All You Love, 'Forever,'" John! ~ Smile, "Have A Most Beautiful & Blessed of Day, 'Beautiful Satish,' Amid 'The Arms of Such Love' That, Shall 'Never' Let 'You' Go;" Bye Beautiful Satish!:) ~

John Rhinem

Date: 9/3/2010 2:33:00 AM

Smile ~ Actually, "Beautiful Satish Verma," I find myself thinking of "Your Magnificent Brightness" often and, its just a matter of a bit of time before, I find myself sitting daily aside "Your Verse" and, being blessed by "Your Brilliant Bright!!!" ~ As a matter of fact, "Lovely Satish," I have spent moments here and there amid "Your Souls Reflective Words" a few times as of late and ~ ....Cont:)

John Rhinem

Date: 9/3/2010 2:26:00 AM

Smile ~ "There 'You Are,' The Amazing, Talented & 'Beautiful, Satish Verma!!!'" ~ You know I have been sooo very much, wanting to catch up to "Your Splendors" but, I have been soo busy etc., and have for the most part been unable to as of yet but, believe me dear, "You," are upon my things to do list; high upon its sheet ~ ....Cont:)