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For the 'Jill Nursery Rhyme' Poetry Contest of Charles Messina

 

Jill Gets Around

Little Jill loves boating
while big Will water-skies
She holds her water till they dock,
while in the lake Will pees.

Jill goes out sometimes with Phil.
She has a little snack,
but all the crap on Phil’s big plate
could cause a heart attack.

Jill met a guy whose name is Gill.
He thinks that he’s so cool.
But by the way he acts, we know
he never got through grade school.

Jill has her eye on a new guy.
They call him Silly Billy.
Although he’s buff, Jill has been told
he’s got a tiny willy.

Jill has kissed a girl named Milly.
She'll still date a guy,
but she liked that kiss so much,
maybe Jill’s gone Bi.
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James Avatar
November 25, 2024 at 2:46 AM
Congratulations on your top win Andrea. Emilia : )
Woods Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 2:33 PM
Congratulations Andrea! Xo
Jones Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 1:10 PM
Congratulations to you as well Andrea!
Read Avatar
November 20, 2024 at 12:04 PM
Congratulations Andrea on your contest win. Xx
Davey Avatar
November 19, 2024 at 9:40 AM
LOL cute little tale Andrea and as always deserving to the top, congrats
Goldsmith Avatar
November 18, 2024 at 12:17 PM
Congratulations on your win. Way toooooo much fun here... Have a fun day with your win as you write away..................
Proxenos Avatar
November 18, 2024 at 10:16 AM
Andrea huge congrats my friend , very well done. Blessings, Hugs, Jennifer.
Zahid Avatar
November 18, 2024 at 9:50 AM
Congrats buddy
Crandall Avatar
November 18, 2024 at 9:13 AM
Entertaining! I like Jill's philosophy; you don't know what's best unless you try a little of everything!
Roper Avatar
November 18, 2024 at 6:37 AM
hahaha.. enjoyed reading my friend
Messina Avatar
November 18, 2024 at 1:31 AM
Andrea, this is hilarious! Congratulations on your top win! Thanks for entering my contest. ~Charlie
Proxenos Avatar
November 5, 2024 at 8:43 PM
My dear friend this is a wonderfull poem snd love the modern vibe around it. . Jill seems to ba the popular gal with us all. A winner for sure. Andrea , Love and hugs my friend. JENNIFER.
Gregory Avatar
November 5, 2024 at 10:11 AM
Distinguishable the ways of the genders, true euphemism in the pace and similarity in society. Nicely done.
Read Avatar
November 5, 2024 at 7:54 AM
Hi Andrea, your last verse sums up our world of today, I wonder if the rumour is true concerning silly Billy lol.
Narain Avatar
November 1, 2024 at 11:06 AM
Lol, you have touched on modern social themes.
Rodgers Avatar
November 1, 2024 at 9:39 AM
Dear Andrea, Your well-inked poem is clever and well-written, and I think you have a winner. I laughed, and I smiled and thought that is what dating is all about. LOL!! Autumn Blessings, MY Dear Friend, Daniel
Rolland Avatar
November 1, 2024 at 2:16 AM
enjoyed, humor saves everything, what a nice poem, thanks Andrea, enjoy your poem
Dietrich Avatar
November 1, 2024 at 9:36 AM
Thanks, Yann
Cunningham Avatar
October 31, 2024 at 11:39 PM
Lol, hilarious Andrea, Charlie will love this one. Tom
Dietrich Avatar
November 1, 2024 at 12:50 AM
Thanks, Tom
Empress Avatar
October 31, 2024 at 11:21 PM
Dear sweet andrea, My dry sense of humor never feels dry when you crack jokes hahah. Gosh! Seriously! This is hilarious! Iv heard its a thing about buff guys, we must tell jill, lol! The last one made me think of katy perrys song! Hah! Brilliant!! Best wishes for the contest; waking up to this was wonderful! You always make me laugh! Sending you light always~
Dietrich Avatar
November 1, 2024 at 12:50 AM
This was so fun to do. And yes I was thinking of the Katie Perry song. Wait till you see my holiday set!
Tor Avatar
October 31, 2024 at 11:07 PM
Lol Andrea like Lin said this is not your usual style but it's great. I concur with her and add it made me smile. Thanks for the smile this morning, boy you are up early in the morning. Best wishes in Charles contest...
Dietrich Avatar
November 1, 2024 at 12:51 AM
Thanks. I am still up. My weekend is starting . I. can stay up past my usual 1 a., m and sleep in
Lane Avatar
October 31, 2024 at 9:07 PM
lol Andrea. This is not your usual style, but it's great.
Dietrich Avatar
November 1, 2024 at 12:49 AM
Actually I have a LOT of this stuff. It's just buried in years of poetry pages here. Glad you liked this
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