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For the 'Jill Nursery Rhyme' Poetry Contest of Charles Messina

 
Little Jill loves boating while big Will water-skies She holds her water till they dock, while in the lake Will pees. Jill goes out sometimes with Phil. She has a little snack, but all the crap on Phil’s big plate could cause a heart attack. Jill met a guy whose name is Gill. He thinks that he’s so cool. But by the way he acts, we know he never got through grade school. Jill has her eye on a new guy. They call him Silly Billy. Although he’s buff, Jill has been told he’s got a tiny willy. Jill has kissed a girl named Milly. She'll still date a guy, but she liked that kiss so much, maybe Jill’s gone Bi.

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Date: 11/25/2024 2:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win Andrea. Emilia : )
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Date: 11/22/2024 2:33:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea! Xo
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Date: 11/22/2024 1:10:00 PM
Congratulations to you as well Andrea!
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Date: 11/20/2024 12:04:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea on your contest win. Xx
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Date: 11/19/2024 9:40:00 AM
LOL cute little tale Andrea and as always deserving to the top, congrats
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Date: 11/18/2024 12:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Way toooooo much fun here... Have a fun day with your win as you write away..................
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Date: 11/18/2024 10:16:00 AM
Andrea huge congrats my friend , very well done. Blessings, Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 11/18/2024 9:50:00 AM
Congrats buddy
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Date: 11/18/2024 9:13:00 AM
Entertaining! I like Jill's philosophy; you don't know what's best unless you try a little of everything!
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Date: 11/18/2024 6:37:00 AM
hahaha.. enjoyed reading my friend
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Date: 11/18/2024 1:31:00 AM
Andrea, this is hilarious! Congratulations on your top win! Thanks for entering my contest. ~Charlie
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Date: 11/5/2024 8:43:00 PM
My dear friend this is a wonderfull poem snd love the modern vibe around it. . Jill seems to ba the popular gal with us all. A winner for sure. Andrea , Love and hugs my friend. JENNIFER.
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Date: 11/5/2024 10:11:00 AM
Distinguishable the ways of the genders, true euphemism in the pace and similarity in society. Nicely done.
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Date: 11/5/2024 7:54:00 AM
Hi Andrea, your last verse sums up our world of today, I wonder if the rumour is true concerning silly Billy lol.
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Date: 11/1/2024 11:06:00 AM
Lol, you have touched on modern social themes.
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Date: 11/1/2024 9:39:00 AM
Dear Andrea, Your well-inked poem is clever and well-written, and I think you have a winner. I laughed, and I smiled and thought that is what dating is all about. LOL!! Autumn Blessings, MY Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 11/1/2024 2:16:00 AM
enjoyed, humor saves everything, what a nice poem, thanks Andrea, enjoy your poem
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/1/2024 9:36:00 AM
Thanks, Yann
Date: 10/31/2024 11:39:00 PM
Lol, hilarious Andrea, Charlie will love this one. Tom
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/1/2024 12:50:00 AM
Thanks, Tom
Date: 10/31/2024 11:21:00 PM
Dear sweet andrea, My dry sense of humor never feels dry when you crack jokes hahah. Gosh! Seriously! This is hilarious! Iv heard its a thing about buff guys, we must tell jill, lol! The last one made me think of katy perrys song! Hah! Brilliant!! Best wishes for the contest; waking up to this was wonderful! You always make me laugh! Sending you light always~
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/1/2024 12:50:00 AM
This was so fun to do. And yes I was thinking of the Katie Perry song. Wait till you see my holiday set!
Date: 10/31/2024 11:07:00 PM
Lol Andrea like Lin said this is not your usual style but it's great. I concur with her and add it made me smile. Thanks for the smile this morning, boy you are up early in the morning. Best wishes in Charles contest...
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/1/2024 12:51:00 AM
Thanks. I am still up. My weekend is starting . I. can stay up past my usual 1 a., m and sleep in
Date: 10/31/2024 9:07:00 PM
lol Andrea. This is not your usual style, but it's great.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/1/2024 12:49:00 AM
Actually I have a LOT of this stuff. It's just buried in years of poetry pages here. Glad you liked this

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