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Jigsaw of a Shattered Soul

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Today I release my 2nd Haunting Halloween poem, with several more to come. Probably many influences from great writers such as Poe, Peale, Shyamalan, King, Koontz, etc...

"The poet types while the reader reads, both trapped in the void's vortex. A place to taste the color of oblivion and hear the texture of a haunting lonely scream." - Daniel Henry Rodgers

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The old man's trophy, antlers impale my v i s c e r a l veins. Love, a moth's wings, ash-dusted, flutters its last in death's gnashing gullet. My soul—a charred fetus, longing and annihilation wrestle and thrash in the womb’s dark dilation... Terrible beauty claws poised—waiting to devour me w h o l e. Leaden sky crushes; bruising hues fuse, raining suffocating soot. V o id s // Vo r tex. Despair's dirk, a devouring dance, a mother's lullaby, heart's hollow thump— death's cold fingers tear at my tangled, torn, time-worn, tethered skin. This brief brutal ballet, a grace unplanned— I fade, a shadow's ghostly cry swallowed by the void. Root . Rot . Garden . of my dread, where life's incense chokes, angels fear to tread. Do poisonous black orchids bloom from ribcage . soil ? Fetid fetus, fate's fickle feast, blind to cruel snares, in death's throes, I birth my despair. Vo id's Vor tex. Shadows slither, serpentine, sinister in my fevered head, an ann- ihil- ation of . molten . red. Time's ruins, a palimpsest of shattered dreams, meaning slips; fingers bleed, heart torn apart. Womb's doom looms, consuming truths in life's guttering spark— journey through lands . cold . stark . dark. Endless roads where shadows start and dart. My mind, a hissing gas chamber of vertigo thoughts—falling apart. Persephone's hair melts—a Dali dreamscape of pomegranate seeds, dreams pursued where nightmares breed. Heart, a vessel of guttering light, in death's face, defiant, despite life's lost pieces— a j i g s a w bled of dread-filled V O I D. Voi d s . Vort ex. I a m . p e r P e n d I c u L a r, severed from l i F e— I would rather be dead, begging for cold Stonehenge courage for the h o r L z o n T a l of the g R a V e. The Voids . Vortex . g a p e s, a black, serpentine swirl, devouring light and . life, with primal, pitiless hunger, its spiraling d a r k ness writhes like a wounded beast, pulling me into its, R A W, r a v e n o u s c a v e.

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Date: 11/1/2024 2:30:00 AM
Daniel you have mastered the Dramatic Monologue. This is a unique creative dark infested theme that haunts you in your thoughts when reading. Incredible effort went into writing and conveying. Thank you for sharing now I will leave the lights on when I go to sleep, thank you very much, lol...
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Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 11/1/2024 5:18:00 AM
Hello Michael, it was wonderful reading your insights to my poem this morning and I am very appreciative. The Dramatic verses does take quite a bit of time to get them in the best shape for reading and even then it seems like I want to change things. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Date: 10/31/2024 7:15:00 AM
A dark, creative and masterfully crafted poem. Scary, mysterious, and original, keeping me on the edge of my seat. Thank-you for a lovely comment on my POTD. Blessings Daniel, Jennifer.
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Date: 11/1/2024 5:16:00 AM
Dear Jennifer, What a nice treat to see your comments today. I appreciate them. This particular one is a person who is falling into their own mental vortex and unable to escape at least in the moment or perhaps never. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Date: 10/25/2024 5:52:00 PM
Very creative with amazing dark imagery throughout this write. And the way you formatted this poem adds so much to it keeping the reader attentive through the highs and lows, thank you for this dark ride! A++
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Date: 10/27/2024 6:23:00 AM
Hello Brian, Thank you for your comments to which I am most grateful for and appreciative. Autumn Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
Date: 10/23/2024 12:29:00 PM
Very POE-etic!!! Excellent images of darkness, Daniel. The authors you mentioned are all ones I love as well.
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Date: 10/24/2024 5:32:00 AM
Dear Andrea, what wonderful comments. I think we are all inspired by great writers of the past, and it is reflected in all our writings to some degree. This time of year is a wonderful time to release these more goth-type poems. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Date: 10/23/2024 10:47:00 AM
Oh my, I think I will stay clear of your house this year, on Halloween, that cave sure sounds scary Daniel, I love the way you can shift with the changes and moods of the season, a poetic charmeleon to be admired, love it
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Date: 10/24/2024 5:30:00 AM
Dear Rose, LOL! The cave is only in my mind. I start thinking about these poems 2 to 3 months in advance and I get inspired by the seasons. Thank You for your support! Autumn Blessings, MY Dear Friend, Daniel
Date: 10/23/2024 8:52:00 AM
Hi Daniel, you certainly have a gift for the macabre, I'm sure the great poets of the past would be pleased with your Halloween poem.
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Date: 10/24/2024 5:28:00 AM
Hello John, thank you, and I appreciate your comments. Reading the greats of the past and blending my counseling background helps me put these together. Also Halloween has something to do with it. :) Autumn Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
Date: 10/23/2024 8:27:00 AM
Scary descriptive lines penned. Sara K
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Date: 10/24/2024 5:26:00 AM
Dear Sara, Thank you and this a blend of my love of writers like Poe and my counseling background. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Date: 10/23/2024 7:51:00 AM
Great quote Daniel, Your verse takes us through the pain and despair within death's void, Very nicely penned
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Date: 10/24/2024 5:25:00 AM
Thanks Joe, I appreciate it and have a great week. Autumn Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
Date: 10/23/2024 12:51:00 AM
A marvellous haunting write Daniel, captivating from beginning to end… Beryl
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Date: 10/23/2024 7:50:00 AM
Dear Beryl, It was wonderful to see your note this morning. I appreciate it, and I am thankful! Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Date: 10/22/2024 7:40:00 AM
Dear Daniel, wow! Im speechless! And in awe of how youv played around with words in such a free flowing abstract manner with such dark diction that fits the mood right now! I love those internal rhymes to seamless alliterations and profound nature of your word weaving! You really always leave readers in awe! I especially love the arrangement of words and how they give a very artistic touch to your poem! For some reason i always love halloween, and youv really given me and many readers all the
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Date: 10/22/2024 11:51:00 AM
Dearest Empress, Your well-inked comments are some of the most rewarding things about writing a poem. I cannot express my appreciation enough. I have several more Halloween releases ready to go but I am trying to drop them strategically all the way to Oct 31st. This is that time of year really lay out the darker sides of life but not in a bad way but in a poetic way that draws a reader in and captures them into the Vortex. Again I am always thankful for your FAVs and comments. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 10/22/2024 7:41:00 AM
Reasons to appreciate this! I must also highlight what i loved the most in this, “ My mind, a hissing gas chamber of vertigo thoughts—falling apart. Persephone's hair melts—a Dali dreamscape of pomegranate seeds, dreams pursued where nightmares breed.” Wow! Your use of mythology and also how youv described darkness within is beyond impeccable! A big Fave for this dear daniel! Sending you light always
Date: 10/22/2024 6:35:00 AM
You've created a scattering of words as if they were puzzle pieces strewn upon a table with a smattering of Alliteration. The pieces that are upside down are cloaked in darkness, devouring the light of those that fit. It's a haunting form... daunting as I try to avoid tasting the fear it begets.
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Date: 10/22/2024 11:48:00 AM
Dearest Lin, It is a pleasure to see your comments. They are well thought out, and I am grateful. You are seeing the Gothic side of my brain, and I tell my family that when I drive to work, which is three hours a day round trip, my brain goes into overload about my next writings, and October is a perfect time to release these darker ones. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Date: 10/22/2024 6:09:00 AM
OMG dear Daniel, this is dark- impressionistic, surrealistic and sensational. And to add to the mayhem it's a horror jigsaw of no less than a shattered soul, and a palimpsest of dreams pasted one on top of another. I think the foetus is better off staying in the womb. I'm gobsmacked to say the least. You mentioned in your comment I should make a drama - we should get together and make a Box Office hit. Lol The formatting must have been tedious and taken ages. Well done. Hugs Maria
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Date: 10/22/2024 5:41:00 PM
Thank you Daniel for your response to my comment. I'm flattered. I'm not sure if you've looked at my lengthy reply to your review on 'Can you P an AI Robot Off' - Yes lot's of Musical drama ideas I would like to turn into scripts. Blessings to you too. Hugs Maria
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Date: 10/22/2024 11:42:00 AM
Dear Maria, It is very rewarding to read your comments to my poem. When I was in grade school, high school, college, and even as an adult, I loved to do plays and musicals. I do not do that so much anymore, but I fell in love with writing poetry many years ago, and some of my fav to write are Dramatic Verse and Dramatic Monologue, which allow me to explore the actor in me. Also, the postmodern approach allows us to put words on a page and show it visually. These are my attempts. :)Yes, maybe we should write a script together. Thank YoU!! Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Date: 10/21/2024 11:33:00 PM
Hi Daniel, this one takes you into some dark places, all without signposts or exits...creatively put together and befitting Halloween. Your imagination must have been in overdrive to produce such imagery...an entertaining and spellbinding read. Off now for a gin and tonic. Cheers my friend....
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Date: 10/22/2024 11:38:00 AM
Hello Paul, Thank You! When I get into the Autumn Season, I try to change it up to be more darker, at least for this time of the year. I have always been impressed with Poe and his writings, which are so full of goth! I usually start this series process at the end of August and the beginning of September to be released at this time of year. Autumn Blessings My Friend Daniel
Date: 10/21/2024 10:13:00 PM
Help Daniel, I need to get out of the vortex, so I can stay vertical! Powerful writing.
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Date: 10/22/2024 11:36:00 AM
Hello David, LOL! It is kind of like the descent into madness. I always loved the Joker movie with Joquin Phoenix because he did a fantastic job of showing what the descent looks like. Being a counselor, I try to use mental health in my darker poems. Autumn Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
Date: 10/21/2024 7:01:00 PM
It is frightening. Birth, life, and perpetuity. You covered it fully well. I am prepared for Halloween. Thanks for this poem.
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Date: 10/22/2024 11:34:00 AM
Dear Hilda, Thank you for your wonderful note. I am always appreciative. You see, the dark side of my writings comes out this time of year, and they are a real challenge. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Date: 10/21/2024 2:52:00 PM
Hello Daniel Rodgers, This is really creepy. blessings my friend. /Darlene/
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Date: 10/22/2024 2:16:00 PM
Hello Daniel,Thank you Happy autumn. yes I do think you have rod Serling and Poe in you. Thank you. today it felt like summer. The raking of leaves have begun. today we did 9 bags of leaves. Happy Autumn to you. /Darlene/
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Date: 10/22/2024 11:32:00 AM
Dear Darlene, Ahhh, it is that time of year when I like to release my creepy stuff. I think I have some Rod Serling and Poe in me. :) Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Date: 10/21/2024 11:53:00 AM
I can see what you tried to do with the formatting of the poem to impact the reading... You are a great storyteller and your vocabulary seems very strong in the selection of words you use to express..
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Date: 10/22/2024 11:31:00 AM
Dear SO, Thank you, and I appreciate your support. I spend much time trying to select meaningful words for the poem. Once the words start flowing, the story is built. As you can tell, it has a more post-modern layout. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Date: 10/21/2024 9:04:00 AM
Whoa, heavy stuff- it feels so dark, and it seems to want to stay that way, in the womb, rather than face the pain of ife in the light-
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Date: 10/22/2024 11:29:00 AM
Dear Paige, For some reason, I get very motivated to write more darkly when we get into the fall months, and then by November, I am writing introspectively. Thanks for your support. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Date: 10/21/2024 8:42:00 AM
What a creative write. We do not do Halloween but I enjoyed your story. Thanks for your note on the top... Have a blessed/wonderful day.....................
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Date: 10/22/2024 11:27:00 AM
Dear Paula, I am very thankful that you read it whether it was Halloween or any other day of the week. I get this inspiration starting in August, Sept and Oct to write more like Poe but modern. I am always appreciative of your visits. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

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