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Little jewels of inspiration are strewn all around us if we look for them. By Poet
I won't fade before sunrise. may sprouts of affection sigh I will never close my eyes, from the turtle dove's tears dry. Strewn on the sandy beach floor I'm willing to face what strike needless for the shoring boor, although they are still in spike. I aim to face the sun's rays, may the blooms be dwell and well? I'm not running from my ways, from tears of concealed jewel. I'll be set free when dawn blew, let us swing near to our hopes. No more harm inside of you! Such awe would deploy pearl ropes. A gem is not quite a stone, unless it glows from the core. A soul can apply some shone, on auld rocks and call them ore.
5TH PLACE CONTEST WINNER Checked by HMS.COM Written: March 18, 2022 Form J - Just Write Me a New Poem Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 3/27/2022 6:58:00 AM
Congratulations Sotto, on your win. Outstanding poem. Blessings ~ Debra Reply
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Date: 3/26/2022 6:59:00 PM
Sotto, congratulations on your win in my Just Write Me A Poem contest, wonderful and I like you quote and image too ~Constance
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Date: 3/27/2022 6:37:00 AM
Thank you very much, Constance, for providing us with the chance to review this brand-new form that had never been seen previously. We appreciate everything you've done to keep this site active and to provide opportunities for us to improve our talents. Thank you for your kind words and blessings.
Date: 3/25/2022 10:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write/quote and picture. Love It. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away.............
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Date: 3/24/2022 10:18:00 PM
"I won't fade before sunrise" - Great beginning and the whole poem is beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/19/2022 5:21:00 AM
Your jewels of inspiration shine in this poem, Lasaad. Win BIG my friend.
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Date: 3/18/2022 8:09:00 PM
'A gem is not quite a stone, unless it glows from the core'.... Love these lines !
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