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three jet planes' smoke trail collision course evident.... watching, waiting I ?

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/17/2021 5:03:00 PM

I don't know. Looks like two airplanes 'making out' to me... lol. Hope they didn't 'break up.' ~ gw

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/18/2021 5:54:00 AM

Gershon, Well, the ones I was watching did not collide but it looked like they might. I like your sense of humor. Your presence gave me a light chuckle. Those two above definitely broke up. Sara

Quoth Theraven

Date: 1/17/2021 1:21:00 PM

Sara, A warning for contrail's in due course. Murphy's Law has its ups and downs. -Richard

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/17/2021 1:55:00 PM

Quoth, Yes, Murphy does have those laws. If they keep flying there is bound to be a crash at some time. Thanks for sharing those thoughts. Sara

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/15/2021 9:33:00 PM

Oh dear a poem of a possible disaster, yet love it and the form..Stay Safe..Harry

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/17/2021 1:51:00 PM

Harry, It did look like disaster but no telling how many miles apart they were. Your presence here is always encouraging. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/15/2021 4:39:00 PM

would not want to be standing under it!!!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/17/2021 1:51:00 PM

Andrea, You are exactly right for no telling which way the parts would fall. I like your thinking. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/15/2021 8:22:00 AM

- A scary situation ... glad it went well - There's a lot of traffic in the blue ... - Have a lovely weekend, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/15/2021 1:00:00 PM

Sunshine, I am gad it went well also for all aboard the airplanes and for those on the ground. Your acknowledgement of my work by taking time to comment is refreshing. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/14/2021 10:07:00 PM

I would be aghast with fright. ~~

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/15/2021 7:14:00 AM

Victor, It looked like they would converge but there is not telling how many miles apart they were up there in that great blue yonder. It seemed they were on a collision course but not. I watched to see what would happen. Sara