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Pubs n clubs I worked in the Jet club, as a bouncer, on the front door, Jonny Okeefe was our singer, loud music, a red light for sure, Jonny sang “she wears my ring, with deepest emotion,” ladies distracted were by this lovers thing, wild one, brought dancers on with devotion, made their hearts twang and sing, some more, the potion, Ladies would ask me this question,“Any Business men in the place,” Wanting a solid provider, Cos love had been left the race, I’d be walking about in red darkness, watching the rubbish paper on the floor, For the drunks were dropping their dollars, dollars were mine if I saw, The manager said with your head down, get an upper cut for sure, But with ten dollar bills n the twentys, it was worth me few dollars more, So at 3am I’d be walking, over Story Bridge, yes once more, Going home to sleep with the faeries, or some lady that I’d scored. Natalie :) The Rogue Rhymer Contest Name Confessions to a bartender

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Date: 10/22/2011 6:10:00 PM
I'd rather sleep with some lady than the faeries; though, of course, nothing wrong with it. Like how your words tumble along effortlessly.
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Don Johnson
Date: 10/22/2011 7:09:00 PM
Imagination faeries John, not the shirt lifter ones, Lived that life in the pubs n clubs, one of me hundred jobs...
Date: 10/22/2011 9:11:00 AM
Best of luck to you in the contest, is a fantastic write...luv shannon
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Date: 10/22/2011 7:20:00 AM
Don, I believe you've been there. Great story. Tony
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Don Johnson
Date: 10/22/2011 7:12:00 PM
Hundred jobs in my lifetime this was only the one, that had me going home with the shielas, bad tempered and grumpy were some, oh the sights at 5am when i'd depart for home, and the line up on saturday night, who was i now to take home??? you mongrel they'd say:)
Date: 10/22/2011 6:10:00 AM
Been a while since I have had the pleasure of sampling your work. Excellent piece and excellent entry into the contest.
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