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Jesus Help Me - written by my seven-year-old son, Dylan

Jesus help me with my problems that I have each day. When I go through many things everyday - like school, listening and grades. Jesus also help me to be a great big brother and a great son to my mother and father and a friend to all.
By Dylan Saunders

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/19/2014 2:53:00 AM
This is an absolute gem from Dylan, Rhonda ;) beautiful prayer xx
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Date: 12/8/2014 7:45:00 AM
What a wonderful heartfelt prayer. I believe God answered this one in advance.
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Date: 12/8/2014 5:22:00 AM
Well done Dylan!!! I can tell by this poem that you are a very good and clever boy. I hope that you will keep on writing, and read as much as you can. I am giving you a 7 rating to show you how much I enjoyed reading your sweet poem. // paul
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Date: 12/7/2014 7:39:00 PM
Hi Dylan. You made me so happy that I could read one of your poems. You are already starting to be a great poet and I hope to see you here more often. You have a beautiful heart that I can see and I know Jesus can also see it and he will always be at your side when you ask him. Your friend and fellow poet Brenda.
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Date: 12/7/2014 6:59:00 PM
Please tell that future great poet to keep on writing. His wisdom and sharing is an inspiration to one and all! Giving this fine poem a solid 7 !!
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Date: 12/7/2014 4:20:00 AM
Dylan I really love your poem. How talented you are. Best of all you write from your heart. I give this poem the highest mark possible. I am also adding it to my list of favorite poems. This way I can read it everyday. You must feel very proud. What a great poet you are.
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Date: 12/6/2014 10:13:00 PM
Thank you everyone for your comments! Dylan will be so excited when he reads them tomorrow. BIG hugs to all, Rhonda
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Date: 12/6/2014 8:42:00 PM
Sweet is the prayer of a child -- all heaven rejoices -- walk boldly and confidently -- Dylan has covered you with prayer!! Does he take prayer request??
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Date: 12/6/2014 8:39:00 PM
Your seven year old is wise beyond his years. Tell him GREAT POEM.
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Date: 12/6/2014 6:34:00 PM
An awesome poem from Dylan...give him my kudos...hugs Tim
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Date: 12/6/2014 6:05:00 PM
aww so so cute a prayer god bless him:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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