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The way..' Which way? Shown them; us.. One life.' In a world containing many angles. Having doubt as downtime probes in' faces observe, Backs hold awareness yet in turning; still.' A Simile of watching is' Despite my protests I must so re-visit, gather of broken desires Of intention within, around I survey, listening to the disquiet of souls.. As my mind ponders.. Love, It alone makes sense, not a tawdry love.' Not a copy love; pressed on us by media, neither love of slander again A promoted devaluation.' A way exists.' not manufactured from the foibles of human emotion.. Neither an offshoot from its scheming; or the wellspring of deceit, Open as eternity, to those who truly seek; call out now in the tumult' Or silence, before the grave is opened.. That shadow of a 'black hole' Hell has its mirror image, do not be fooled.' Yet the creator has made redemption' All exists..' The good and the evil, 'look' I lay a blessing and a curse before you' Choose that which you desire.!

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Date: 8/8/2016 6:54:00 PM
good and evil go hand in hand, the propaganda flows just like the sand, where comes election time, mutterings of the mime, lies at attention stand.
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Date: 6/1/2016 3:19:00 PM
we all have the option to choose between a blessing or a curse. Enjoyed reading this one, Joe.
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Date: 5/20/2016 6:58:00 AM
Awesome and refreshing. A jaw breaking 7.
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Date: 4/24/2016 5:56:00 PM
Hi, Joe thanks for the visit today. I am off to walk my dog. I can see he is getting SO bored waiting on me!!! Good day to you
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Date: 4/11/2016 6:00:00 PM
Christ is due to come again, to curb the greed of earthly men, time is right you can depend, comes the poor salvations' supper.
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Date: 4/8/2016 6:16:00 PM
The God of the ages, tHe guider o F soul, the wiseth of sages, maker of black holes, controller of end of tHe days.
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Date: 4/3/2016 1:09:00 PM
you did really well with this writing, Joe. I can see you are a very religious man!
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Date: 3/12/2016 11:26:00 AM
I wish all Christians did show the best way of life, for in a world of many angles, there seems to be too few angels. But Joe you give me hope, thanks.
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Date: 3/7/2016 11:17:00 AM
This is a great write my dear friend, Joe. I'm so glad that I've dropped by tonight to read. I'm so sorry for just dropping here now. Btw, belated thanks once again for appreciating my poem in your contest and also for dropping by on one of my latest posts. God bless! love lots and big hug, Leonora
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Date: 3/4/2016 11:19:00 AM
"Love, it alone makes sense." Despite what any religion believes, Jesus was all about love. That you gotta believe or be miserable. Love ya old pal, daver
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Date: 3/4/2016 8:50:00 AM
This is truly a masterpiece Joe, Love your questions, and i'd love to know what he would say..i think today it is harder for my generation, brought up to go to chapel, sunday school, the doctrine placed deep inside one's soul, and then having to face the real world, the abusers that use our own belief to justify...
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Date: 2/28/2016 8:40:00 PM
Well written. This is a ten!
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Joe Maverick
Date: 2/29/2016 12:48:00 AM
Good to hear from you Daniel, thank you for commenting.'