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Jerk's Quirk

There once was a jerk from Sarasota Who fondled a nice girl named Dakota She sued him for cause To control his paws To avoid time, he fled in a Toyota. written July 26, 2021

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Beryl Edmonds

Date: 7/27/2021 5:01:00 PM

Good one Milton…… The jerk from Sarasota never knew - That Dakota owned a Toyota too - She was hot on his heels - To show him how it feels - And what a revengeful ‘nice girl’ can do……. Belle

L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/27/2021 6:34:00 PM

Love it, Belle. I feel like she did!

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 7/27/2021 9:05:00 AM

hahaha!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/27/2021 10:00:00 AM

Thanks, U.S. I got it!!! LOL

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 7/27/2021 5:43:00 AM

Good one, Milton. / Maurice

L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/27/2021 8:48:00 AM

Thanks, Maurice. I was just doddling. It seems like I turn to limericks when the well starts running dry!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/26/2021 8:45:00 PM

Perhaps 'to save time' too! ~ 22 Skidoo and Skedaddle

L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/26/2021 8:47:00 PM

I think so, gw, but I probably would have jumped on a Harley and hittered on out!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/26/2021 8:21:00 PM

There is nothing but fun here; have to wonder if you think up the last line first and work your way to the front?

L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/26/2021 8:40:00 PM

You know, Caren, truth is I start with the first verse and hope something works out! Generally it does, but sometimes with a limerick I just give up and delete it. I can't figure out whether it's more important to have the number of syllables right or the flow of the rhyme. It's hard to work out sometimes.