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Same story as told in "Cameo Acquaintance" in free verse.

Hour upon unending hour, day upon unending day, quietly, in her prison, our dear Jennie Butler lay. No curses did she utter, never once did she complain, though hands and feet were gnarled, swollen, and burning with pain. Instead, she smiled, told us jokes, those she often would repeat, and sing to us the old songs, in tones pleasant and sweet. Down the hall outside her room, other voices mingled there, mumbling and babbling or calling out in despair. No one came to visit her, no one that we could recall, though she waited patiently, no one ever came at all. Published in Art With Words Poetry Quarterly, Oct., 2005 Published in MSPS Anthology Life on the Edge, Dec., 2005 (Aunt Juanita's roommate in the Nursing Home)

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Date: 10/24/2014 12:31:00 PM
Very well done Cona. I appreciate the detailed story you were able to tell and still keep the rhyme.
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Date: 10/24/2014 2:18:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by, Trevor, and for the positive response. I will be visiting your poems soon.

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