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Jellyfish

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Written for the contest: Writing challenge -J words, sponsored by Constance La France

magical sea blooms floating jelly umbrellas docile and deadly . . . graceful seductions soon sting, sea life's fatal attraction!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Constance La France
Date: 7/21/2023 9:54:00 AM
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Tania, beautiful and scary poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge J Words !
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/21/2023 1:08:00 PM
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Constance, thank you and thanks for my placement!
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Valsa George
Date: 7/12/2023 8:27:00 PM
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Sea is a hub of mysteries. Jelly fish and anemones surprise us. A beautiful tanka on Jellyfish. Congratulations Tania on your great win.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/13/2023 3:57:00 AM
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Valsa, thank you.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/11/2023 1:05:00 PM
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Congrats on your fantastic win here, Tania
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/11/2023 4:32:00 PM
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Andrea, thank you.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/11/2023 12:40:00 PM
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- Beautiful description of these disgusting "magical sea blooms" ... I fear them when I swim in the sea, Tania :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/11/2023 12:55:00 PM
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Anne-Lise, thank you, hugs.
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Joseph May
Date: 7/11/2023 5:10:00 AM
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Magical but deadly, Very nicely penned Tania
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/11/2023 12:56:00 PM
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Joseph, thank you.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/11/2023 3:17:00 AM
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A very beautiful Tanka on jellyfish. Congratulations!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/11/2023 4:05:00 AM
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Christuraj, thank you.
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Paul Callus
Date: 7/10/2023 5:41:00 AM
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Jellyfish can mesmerise and seduce with their sultry elegance, Tania, but from experience (and your final line) I know not to trust them any more! ~ Regards // paul
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/10/2023 8:15:00 AM
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Paul, thank you.
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 7/9/2023 9:39:00 PM
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And do they sting, Tania! I had my share of them in the past. Hugs xx
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/10/2023 8:15:00 AM
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Victor, thank you, hugs.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 7/9/2023 8:43:00 PM
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A marvellous Tanka Tania. Though jellyfish have a sting in their tale, they’re beautiful but as you say, it’s a fatal attraction … Belle
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/10/2023 8:15:00 AM
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Belle, thank you.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/9/2023 6:53:00 PM
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Nicely done, Tania! I love that 4th line "graceful seductions soon sting". Blessings, Kim M
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/10/2023 8:15:00 AM
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Kim, thank you.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/9/2023 3:54:00 PM
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Great job here with your jellyfish descriptions.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/9/2023 6:44:00 PM
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Andrea, thank you.
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Lin Lane
Date: 7/9/2023 2:01:00 PM
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Beautiful but dangerous. It's amazing to watch them swim. Good luck with your J entry, Tania.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/9/2023 2:03:00 PM
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Lin, thank you.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/9/2023 1:34:00 PM
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We are attracted to the wonder of, the danger of that buoyant oddity, the enjoyment of your cool jellyfish ku! Hugs ~ Kim
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/9/2023 2:04:00 PM
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Kim, thank you.

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