Jeannie

On a dark hill north of town
Wearing a pretty gown

I found a little lamp
Just beside my camp

I rubbed it and appeared Jeannie
Who looked to be twenty

I demanded from him three wishes
To be laid out in dishes

My first was good health for my mom
Who was unwell at home

My second was fortune good
For my daughters who could

Live their life full
Without anyone’s pull

My third was a trip to Europe
Which was my dream and hope

The Jeannie granted happily
And I slept soundly.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
October 4, 2012 at 2:15 PM
this was a fun one!! too bad Soup has made it more complicated now to try to find older poems and get back to the same page we were just seeing!!
Mehta Avatar
July 28, 2010 at 6:09 AM
I enjoyed the three wishes granted to you. Good luck in the contest
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