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Jealous Jake

Jealous Jake jumps joyously When others quiet boyishly Get shot down And quickly frown Put down by girls coyishly.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Mahtab Bangalee
Date: 3/15/2019 12:09:00 AM
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nice; enjoyed
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/15/2019 12:41:00 AM
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I had to smile and laugh as I typed this one.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 3/13/2019 11:45:00 PM
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Does he get every one of them? Very original!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/15/2019 12:41:00 AM
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Yes, he does!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/13/2019 10:20:00 PM
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Nicely done, Caren, with fine alliteration!
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Joe Dimino
Date: 3/13/2019 6:36:00 AM
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For sure:) One learns to roll with the punches with age--better for it takes longer to heal. Great little poem!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/13/2019 7:18:00 AM
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Thank you for the nice stop by today and the multitude of niceness.

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