Jealous Jake

Jealous Jake jumps joyously When others quiet boyishly Get shot down And quickly frown Put down by girls coyishly.

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Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 3/15/2019 12:09:00 AM

nice; enjoyed

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/15/2019 12:41:00 AM

I had to smile and laugh as I typed this one.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 3/13/2019 11:45:00 PM

Does he get every one of them? Very original!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/15/2019 12:41:00 AM

Yes, he does!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/13/2019 10:20:00 PM

Nicely done, Caren, with fine alliteration!

Joe Dimino

Date: 3/13/2019 6:36:00 AM

For sure:) One learns to roll with the punches with age--better for it takes longer to heal. Great little poem!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/13/2019 7:18:00 AM

Thank you for the nice stop by today and the multitude of niceness.