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Jealous Beauty

Jealous Beauty Your hair is jealous of your face Longing to lay against your cheek. Your lips touch like love at first sight Every time you speak. Your nose, picture perfect, But aspires to be noticed. Your lashes twinkle, But battle for attention How can something so perfect Cause so much contention Jealous beauty.

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Skat A

Date: 5/26/2016 7:38:00 PM

hector, Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*

Susan Palli

Date: 11/16/2010 6:06:00 AM

I liked that!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/15/2010 9:02:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Hector. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Kay'sha Taylor

Date: 11/10/2010 4:26:00 AM

WELCOME WELCOME !! to poetry.com i enjoyed this very much. i will be looking fwd to reading more of your work!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/9/2010 8:13:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your poetry tonight .. hope your time on Soup will be special and fun.. check out the contest page offered to members.. good luck with luv..

Cierra Turks

Date: 11/9/2010 4:07:00 PM

I really like how you described the way this perfect looks and their features. Very beautiful! Keep it up!:)

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/9/2010 1:45:00 PM

Great write...witty! I like the way your imagination thinks.