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Japanese, If You Please

Beings, precious, small, frail, they walk at a precise pace, more wary, than gaijin* with their large log-like feet, of the other small precious lives, the flight of tiny, blue and gold-faced, birds, the cream dipped moth .. on an errant breeze. Close-cropped, clean-cut, trimmed and clipped as their hedges, softly edged like the bamboo fenced trees and lawns; the Japanese glide through their Tokyo as the kanji glides across the page.

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Date: 6/18/2015 5:17:00 PM
Softly edged.. even all these years ago, you saw things and found the right words to describe them. :D Glad I read this...xoxox
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Date: 1/18/2009 5:35:00 PM
Brilliant Debbie! Marvelous word use and imagery. BRAVO! Keith (PS 'On The Edge' is about manic depression.)
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Date: 1/16/2009 9:43:00 AM
You have a incredible way of writing about these cultures that is totally fascinating. You make them come alive with well chosen words. Beautiful!
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