Japanese, If You Please

Beings, precious, small, frail, they walk at a precise pace, more wary, than gaijin* with their large log-like feet, of the other small precious lives, the flight of tiny, blue and gold-faced, birds, the cream dipped moth .. on an errant breeze. Close-cropped, clean-cut, trimmed and clipped as their hedges, softly edged like the bamboo fenced trees and lawns; the Japanese glide through their Tokyo as the kanji glides across the page.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Macmillan Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 5:17 PM
Softly edged.. even all these years ago, you saw things and found the right words to describe them. :D Glad I read this...xoxox
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January 18, 2009 at 5:35 PM
Brilliant Debbie! Marvelous word use and imagery. BRAVO! Keith (PS 'On The Edge' is about manic depression.)
Higgins Avatar
January 16, 2009 at 9:43 AM
You have a incredible way of writing about these cultures that is totally fascinating. You make them come alive with well chosen words. Beautiful!
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