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Japanese Forest Grass At Dawn

Upon the painted hills of green and yellow gold In a dew drop serenade Porcelain eyes of the fragile doll Flickering diamond light of a chartreuse dream Wake in a silent breath of morning light

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/1/2017 10:30:00 AM
Your poem paints a beautiful image - congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/31/2017 9:09:00 PM
Beautifully-phrased poem, Rick - loved it - congrats on your win!
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Date: 7/31/2017 5:50:00 PM
Hi Rick, breathtaking and beautiful. Every line is amazing especially 'porcelain eyes of the fragile doll', stunning. Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 7/5/2017 1:09:00 PM
This is gorgeous, I absolutely adored it! Good luck to you. :)
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Date: 7/1/2017 2:25:00 AM
Lovely write Rick, best wishes.
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Date: 6/30/2017 9:27:00 PM
I certainly would not want to judge this contest! This is another beautiful poem from your golden pen, Rick:)
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Date: 6/30/2017 8:16:00 PM
That's a winner if I ever did read one. This was beautiful Rick.
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