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January Third

The day of your birth, so close to my birthday We always shared a cake and ice cream You lead us through the branch, and dark, shady forest every summer Over hills and stumps, we found all sorts of childish treasures along the way We would swim in the branch most every afternoon to cool off the summer heat We stumbled apon an old rusty moonshine still that had ax holes in the woods, scared that we would get in trouble because of it, somehow. Our canine friends would follow along to see where you would take us, then follow us home again. We had to be home by supper time, we couldn't miss supper.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/4/2010 5:48:00 PM
Must have been quite a surprise finding the old still. Might have some antique value! Smile. Sounds like you two hade a fun adventure. Sincerely, Love, MOses
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Date: 1/4/2010 6:15:00 AM
Big brother the leader and boss. Nice rememberance. Keep the creative pen flowing. Mom
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Date: 1/4/2010 2:27:00 AM
Cinematic, I feel like Im there.
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Date: 1/3/2010 7:08:00 PM
A fine in memoriam
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Date: 1/3/2010 7:00:00 PM
like this sibling comradeship adventure style. enjoed Doris. Nostalgic. -Robert
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Date: 1/3/2010 4:59:00 PM
Enjoyable narrative Doris.. luv this story line ... yes, thankxxx be to God my new heater was put in the other day just in time for our artic blast ... which is going to continue all week long... happy u enjoyed my contributions this Sunday... even Church was cold .. not many bodies in the pews...must still be recovering from new year celebrations... blessings... luv... Linda-Marie
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