Moon Flower Poet Free verse

January Blues

It can feel so 
    overwhelming 
intermittently to the point 
       of getting nearly drowned
yet a struggle in every attempt
       to read 
                   y
                 o
                   u
                  r  
                       M I N D
Touch your  
                    s
                       o
                          u
                              l
Feel your  H E A R T
        They're just few of the 
 occurences that can be
               sensed but  I  S T I L L 
  wouldn't mind…still burning
         still glowing 
         from the distance…


01.13.18


Second place
"Winter Blues"
Free Verse Poetry
Contest
by Laura Loo

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Line Gauthier May 5, 2018 at 9:34 PM Belated congrats on your top win, Moon Flower. Well done. Moon Flower May 6, 2018 at 12:17 AM This is sweet. :) Thank you, Line.

Silent One January 14, 2018 at 6:19 AM Lovely... Moon Flower January 14, 2018 at 11:23 PM Thank you, S.O.

Susan Ashley January 13, 2018 at 4:16 PM Moon Flower, congratulations on your excellent win with your moving poem of beautiful sadness.. ~Susan Moon Flower January 14, 2018 at 11:22 PM Thank you, Susan.

Beautiful Scars January 13, 2018 at 4:06 AM lovely layout, sadly beautiful...great poem, thank you and congrats :)-luloo Moon Flower January 13, 2018 at 4:35 AM Many thanks for the placement, Laura. So honored. :)