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January

Eleven months' wait,
                      Wannabee January ,
                       Youthful promising !



                          New resolutions,
                     Let not winter hibernate,
                           Must effectuate !!





Two haikus- describing month of January 
Written on 12/5/14
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Pandita Sietesantos Date: 6/8/2014 9:53:00 PM Congratulations on another well-deserved win! Login to Reply

Mohan Chutani Date: 6/8/2014 9:51:00 PM a fine win Upma, Congrats. Mohan Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/8/2014 5:54:00 PM Nice win..pd Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/8/2014 10:52:00 AM yours are very directly stated . I love what the first one is saying! congrats to you. Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 6/8/2014 9:57:00 AM Congrats on the win in the haiku contest on January, Dr.Upma Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 6/8/2014 9:33:00 AM Congrats on your placement.. I do a bit of hibernating in winter.lol. BG Login to Reply

Theresa Stephens Date: 6/8/2014 9:06:00 AM Hi Dr Upma, Congrats on your placement. Loved the wording of the second Haiku in particular. All the best Theresa xx Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 6/8/2014 8:38:00 AM DR UMPA, :) Congratulations, thank you for the support....... SKAT Login to Reply

Heather Secrest Date: 5/17/2014 1:35:00 PM I have to admit January is my favorite month. Not only does it give birth to a new year, it gave birth to me. :) Great write!! ~Heather Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 5/16/2014 11:06:00 AM I like both haiku where January gives birth to a new year full of promises and resolutions. gl in contest. // paul Login to Reply Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 6/9/2014 1:46:00 PM Thanks Paul ! Ur good wishes hv worked n there I m to have ur wishes again ! Paul Callus Date: 6/8/2014 1:19:00 PM ...and congratulations on its success, Upma !! :)

Sara Kendrick Date: 5/13/2014 6:15:00 PM Reads like a winner to me..Way to go ..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Login to Reply Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 6/9/2014 1:44:00 PM Thanks for visit n wishes Sara ! It really worked !

Sam Raj Date: 5/13/2014 11:03:00 AM Nice haiku. Promises,Seasons, resolutions, hibernate, effectuate. It's worth the wait. Thanks for sharing Login to Reply Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 5/13/2014 11:32:00 AM Thanks for ur valuable comments Sam !

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/13/2014 8:46:00 AM hey these are pretty good. I used the hibernation theme in mine too. Not posted them yet but hopefully soon!! Login to Reply Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 5/13/2014 9:36:00 AM Thanks for passing by n the like Andrea!