Dr. Upma A. Sharma Poet Haiku

January

Eleven months' wait,
                      Wannabee January ,
                       Youthful promising !



                          New resolutions,
                     Let not winter hibernate,
                           Must effectuate !!





Two haikus- describing month of January 
Written on 12/5/14
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Pandita Sietesantos June 8, 2014 at 9:53 PM Congratulations on another well-deserved win!

Mohan Chutani June 8, 2014 at 9:51 PM a fine win Upma, Congrats. Mohan

Poet Destroyer A June 8, 2014 at 5:54 PM Nice win..pd

Andrea Dietrich June 8, 2014 at 10:52 AM yours are very directly stated . I love what the first one is saying! congrats to you.

Dr.Ram Mehta June 8, 2014 at 9:57 AM Congrats on the win in the haiku contest on January, Dr.Upma

Barbara Gorelick June 8, 2014 at 9:33 AM Congrats on your placement.. I do a bit of hibernating in winter.lol. BG

Theresa Stephens June 8, 2014 at 9:06 AM Hi Dr Upma, Congrats on your placement. Loved the wording of the second Haiku in particular. All the best Theresa xx

Skat A June 8, 2014 at 8:38 AM DR UMPA, :) Congratulations, thank you for the support....... SKAT

Heather Secrest May 17, 2014 at 1:35 PM I have to admit January is my favorite month. Not only does it give birth to a new year, it gave birth to me. :) Great write!! ~Heather

Paul Callus May 16, 2014 at 11:06 AM I like both haiku where January gives birth to a new year full of promises and resolutions. gl in contest. // paul Dr. Upma A. Sharma June 9, 2014 at 1:46 PM Thanks Paul ! Ur good wishes hv worked n there I m to have ur wishes again ! Paul Callus June 8, 2014 at 1:19 PM ...and congratulations on its success, Upma !! :)

Sara Kendrick May 13, 2014 at 6:15 PM Reads like a winner to me..Way to go ..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Dr. Upma A. Sharma June 9, 2014 at 1:44 PM Thanks for visit n wishes Sara ! It really worked !

Sam Raj May 13, 2014 at 11:03 AM Nice haiku. Promises,Seasons, resolutions, hibernate, effectuate. It's worth the wait. Thanks for sharing Dr. Upma A. Sharma May 13, 2014 at 11:32 AM Thanks for ur valuable comments Sam !

Andrea Dietrich May 13, 2014 at 8:46 AM hey these are pretty good. I used the hibernation theme in mine too. Not posted them yet but hopefully soon!! Dr. Upma A. Sharma May 13, 2014 at 9:36 AM Thanks for passing by n the like Andrea!