Jane-By-Pebble-Beach: -2-

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Poetic Form: Free Verse
Inspired: 2024 September 05
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Clint's an iffy fellow, tis prestige vs the ordinaire, my dear plain Jane--hmm, partially accommodating. Methinks you're a drop-off, my dear, picture a car dropping you off curbside while he goes looking for a fictitious parking space, but a gentleman he is uses the factual context of the 11th hour--OPS you to HAIL me. I gather Mr. Eastwood was gifted said ticket, ... that I am guessing you so happened to be in pysical possession. How did you know that? That would pleasure him of not being a CAD! I forgot that you're like some madda carrie. Mother who? You mean that Mother Teresa (rising popularity 1979). No, that German one. A German Mother Teresa? Was she young Adolph's school teacher. Oh forget it! [LATER: she reveals "Mata Hari']" Did he you call you and tell you, or are you playing Holmes? Doc--tor 'tis Clint's gift? Yes, but-- ... --wait ... it must be somebody of importance ... yes, but who? Hehehe! It would be very rich for me, if I saw a glimpse of your face at this relevant juncture-------was I your suggested choice? ... Yes, Oh my? You're scary!

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