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Jalopy Memories

Jalopy Memories The old jalopy still proudly rumbles down a street now paved with asphalt Flying tattered banners and trailing mists of smoke and steam in circles Riding on thin tires held together by shiny spokes glinting in the sun Remembering the brightest summer Sundays with ladies holding lacy parasols Sitting on leather seats next to gentlemen sporting summer straw hats Holding hamper baskets filled with picnic delicacies of sweet peach cobblers, Jugs of lemonade, crispy chicken and spicy pickles Or recalling afternoons of sweltering heat when a rumble seat overflowed With children clad in bathing suits cradling their inner tubes and fluffy towels Heading to the sandy beaches of a refreshing lake or to the swimming hole With rope swings ready, waiting, for splashing shouts of glee; Hearing again the songs of good old summertime Sung in rhyme to the rhythm of the chugging engine Happily bouncing down shady streets with streetlamps only stopping now To wave at neighbors, scaring friends with “ah-ooh gah” horns, While eating dripping cones of ice cream - No booming woofers drown out the song, The reminiscing of Fords and Packards rebuilt to glory with loving hands Celebrating now their yesteryear in parades with main street cheers When memory’s sweet hand guides the wandering heart back into jalopy days. Written 7-22-19

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Date: 3/15/2020 10:02:00 PM
You have both a great memory for details and a vivid imagination, Sam. I liked "Hearing again the songs of good old summertime" with a wink to that old famous song that sets the time period so brilliantly. Sights, sounds, and smiles are perfect nostalgia fodder. Side note - my dad had a jalopy with rumble seat when he dated my mom! Thanks for the smiles, my friend!
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Date: 8/6/2019 3:37:00 PM
This is a wonderful poem, i see those cars at local shows and always get taken back in memories....you pen shows some glorious moments...congrats on your win :)
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/20/2019 4:04:00 PM
Thank you so much Sandra. The theme just captured me as did the memories. Love old cars!
Date: 7/28/2019 6:49:00 AM
Sam, this was really a journey back to the good old days - those we wish would be here now and forever. For some these present days will become the good ole days but I doubt as inviting as those you describe here.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/30/2019 4:54:00 PM
Thanks so much Craig. I really enjoyed writing this poem. The family of my closest friend from childhood had a vintage, restored "jalopy" with a rumble seat. When it was hot in Seattle her father would take the neighborhood kids swimming at the lake riding in the rumble seat.
Date: 7/28/2019 12:01:00 AM
Sam, your poem was such a delight! I have to remember to teach my grandkids what a rumble seat is. My favorite part is your line about the ah-ooh gah” horns. I am not quite that old but I have watched many movies and recall the fun of it. I so enjoyed your entry. I am happy to see it on the winner's list. Congratulations Sam! : )
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/30/2019 4:58:00 PM
Thanks so much Connie. It was a theme that just grabbed at me and wouldn't let me go until I gave it flesh and soul. Thank you for your kind, encouraging, words.
Date: 7/27/2019 9:47:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Sam. Well done.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/20/2019 4:05:00 PM
Thank you Line! And thank uou for your encouragement!
Date: 7/27/2019 6:10:00 PM
Congratulations, Sam!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/16/2019 4:34:00 PM
Thank you Kim.
Date: 7/27/2019 3:29:00 PM
Sam, CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win! Janice
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/16/2019 4:35:00 PM
Hi Janice, Thank you for your good wishes. It broight back many memories!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/20/2019 4:09:00 PM
Thank you Janice! It was a fun poem to write.

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