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You left me late in the night after all was done and said. And my heart instantly broke, waking to an empty bed. You slipped away from my love as sleep veiled my trusting eyes. And my fear became real; for you left with no goodbyes. Love was a fantasy dream, a mirage that broke apart. And as the fragments shattered, jagged shards impaled my heart I'm teetering on the edge, that defines sane from insane. My heart is devastated; and I can't conceal my pain. Acid tears dissolve color; leaving only shades of grey. But I won't give up on hope and pray you'll return someday.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/13/2018 10:00:00 AM
Awesome, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/13/2018 11:11:00 AM
Thanks so much Line, your visits are always appreciated. Emile.
Date: 10/27/2015 8:07:00 AM
Very sorrowful, and beautifully rendered, Emile. Regards, Viv
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Date: 10/27/2015 10:05:00 AM
Thanks Viv, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 10/26/2015 10:10:00 AM
Emile, so beautifully sad, 7 ~
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Date: 10/26/2015 11:48:00 AM
Thanks Broken, I appreciate your support. Emile.

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