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Jadedness

All too common Conscious counting Of the clock— How many breaks per second— Of my heart in glass; Red spattered on arrows Turning, clicking— (at me) A rattled time An unregognizable face (it shakes hands— the last heat in my frosted veins' touch) It twists numbers out of me; Found out; bosom heavy breathing with the figuring. (How deep is the thick of me) Its chain only squeezes out every good living real— (palms backward still) Fingerprints on time's nerves, Goes without. It's me it makes— It's you that watch.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 11/26/2023 7:06:00 PM
this caught my attention - nicely timed editorializing, the duality of thought delicately interspersed - very nice
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Date: 7/22/2023 10:45:00 PM
The clock continues to make a ticking sound as life moves mechanically in a jaded way. Well expressed dear paige.
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Date: 7/22/2023 8:13:00 PM
Time can be so relentless, the ticking never end…but then, when it does, our time is up.
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