Jacob's Gauntlet

Crawling the serrated knife’s edge
Oh, how the straight path to dreams winds
Driving the lender’s car towards mirages retreating
Tires still dry, one interview to the next
Eaten a lot of oysters, no pearl yet
Another day with the serial assailant of obligations

Home, the abyss of borrowed things, 
                                                      mostly time
Engulfing both horizons as door slams
Broad grin of his baby, another inbound arrow
Wife’s taut coral red kiss, encouraging smile,
Bloodshot eyes don’t wrinkle 
For each tiny swollen vein another lashing

Tony Robbins quote 
on the whiteboard by the fridge 
Smudged and flaking
A woman is, a man becomes, it’s been said
Not yet, snarls the humming silence
In the merciless arena, doubt a costly luxury

Maybe I’ll need a mortgage on that, too

He peers down the vortex to see his inky event horizon
Beguiling, giddy horror in depths, 

How much is my policy?
No, too easy.  

No retreat, just so much harder

If only I’d known what I still don’t know yet
Then I wouldn’t be here

7/5/16
© Thomas W. Quigley

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 7/6/2016 11:13:00 AM
Great write Tom...The compilations of man, a quest to survive in a materialistic world. I know that traffic all too well.
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Date: 7/7/2016 10:42:00 AM
Thanks, Tim. Chicago? Did I hear that somewhere?
Date: 7/6/2016 8:02:00 AM
Nice poem about a desperate man trying to get work and his family facing financial hard times Tom! God Bless-Che:)
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Date: 7/7/2016 10:42:00 AM
Thank you, Cheryl!
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