Jacket

"JACKET"



her jacket in my room like a 
dandelion in an open field, 
hanging clothes with folded 
clothes like faces we 
collect, the smoke from my 
cigar hasn’t grabbed but 
that’s only because she isn’t 
here.
you write about love Eddie,
the good and the bad, who do 
you write about when you do?
does she know you love her?
does she love you too?
have you shown her why your 
love stands above the rest?
will she finally open her 
eyes and understand why you 
two were meant to be one?
I write and like then, I 
understand myself now.
I have a photograph of her in
my bed and she waits for me 
under my cover.
other nights and other nights 
after she left, shoes in my 
closet and clothes on the 
wooden bar, ten years lead us
to the night.
her jacket she left behind
is our night and the love she
left with is our view into
the key hole.
these walls remind me she 
isn’t here.
today the sun came up and it 
was blue and gold.
just sit down with this old 
clown, I’ll take that frown 
and break it.
before our evening went away, 
I knew that we could make it.
I love you baby and I always 
will.



By: Chicano Eddie

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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