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Jack Frost

Jack Frost laid his hand over the lands trees now adorned with hoar frost gems laughing in glee watched people slip then slide helpless down the slopes. Bitter cold from his fingers ran turning the ground rock hard as icicles grew so very long the air so brittle it snapped. Surveyed his domain unsatisfied and pointed a slender finger windows now became jammed locks too now frozen solid. Yet as the sun rose up high Jack Frost's work became undone and back into oblivion he slipped knowing there was always next year.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/3/2014 8:40:00 AM
Well thought out work using personification of the frost of the cold mornings..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 12/3/2014 11:59:00 AM
I enjoy visiting you Sara ty for liking this hugs
Date: 12/2/2014 3:55:00 PM
Love your personification of him. GREAT job.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 12/3/2014 11:58:00 AM
ty Andrea and Season's Greeting have a lovely time hugs
Date: 12/1/2014 2:36:00 PM
Frost is such a fragile thing - in between snow & ice! Light & Love
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 12/2/2014 9:58:00 AM
ty for reading Debbie I love a hoar frost everything sparkles hugs
Date: 12/1/2014 3:29:00 AM
- Yes, Jack Frost has come here too - a great winter poem, dear Shadow - Put on gloves, hat and scarf ........... chilly !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 12/2/2014 9:56:00 AM
it has been warm enough to sit out when ever it's not raining Anne Lise hugs
Date: 12/1/2014 3:20:00 AM
you just reminded me better put anti freeze in the car good morning pal excellent pen
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 12/2/2014 9:54:00 AM
ty Liam dear pal go do it now lol hugs
Date: 12/1/2014 1:11:00 AM
wonderful imagery Shadow its a 7 from me:-) hugs jan xx
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 12/2/2014 9:53:00 AM
much appreciated Jan hugs

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