Jack and Jillian

A modern nursery rhyme Jack and Jillian were sweethearts They lived on a midwestern farm Ravaged by drought one summer Lack of water sounded the alarm So they set out to fetch a bucket At a spring not too far from home Half mile down the road they traveled Came upon a hill they had known As they started up this familiar hill Jack lost his footing and fell down Jillian came tumbling after him They both had broken their crowns Jack got to his feet immediately Ran home as fast as he could caper Wrapped his head with a bandage Of vinegar and handy brown paper Moral of this modern nursery rhyme Never trust a fellow named Jack He'll love you and leave you stranded And probably never come back! © Jack Ellison 2013
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Breidenthal Avatar
August 7, 2013 at 7:17 PM
Oh no, Jack! You didn't!! This is brilliant! Absolutely brilliant! Always, Laura
Ellison Avatar
August 7, 2013 at 7:43 PM
You are sweet! Absolutely sweet! Thank you and warm hugs to you, nice lady! xoxoxox
Eastman Avatar
August 7, 2013 at 4:55 PM
Yes, Dragon... if you save fair maiden Jillian you'll be a true hero... But you've got to find her first... No you burned the map... No I won't buy you another... and no! It Won't tell you where fair maid Jillian is... There is no X marks the spot... Silly Dragon!
Ellison Avatar
August 7, 2013 at 5:36 PM
Jillian is in an undisclosed location recuperating from her broken crown! If my sources find out where she is, we'll let Dragon know! Hugs, Jacko xoxox
Jones Avatar
August 7, 2013 at 4:33 PM
Ya think he tripped Jillian on his way down? That's why she fell too? Ahhhhh you do keep us going Jackster.....
Ellison Avatar
August 7, 2013 at 5:39 PM
Now why what you think so badly of Jack... he's a nice young fellow! LOL Warm hugs, Jack (not related) xoxox
Kendrick Avatar
August 7, 2013 at 3:35 PM
Cute one..Got a chuckle..Sara
Ellison Avatar
August 7, 2013 at 5:25 PM
Thank you Sara... much appreciated! Big hugs, Jack xoxox
Hendricks Avatar
August 7, 2013 at 1:46 PM
Hahahaha. I had me a good laugh on this one, Jack. Good going, my friend. Licia :-)
Ellison Avatar
August 7, 2013 at 2:53 PM
Happy to hear you had a good giggle! Warm hugs, Jack xoxox
Onclaud Avatar
August 7, 2013 at 11:11 AM
you are wickedly hilarious, jack!...i hope you'll make a book on your anecdotes; it will be off the shelves before you know it... fantastic!.) huggs
Ellison Avatar
August 7, 2013 at 12:08 PM
Nette dear lady... thanks for your oh so kind words! Heart love and bunches of hugs, Jack xox
Manassian Avatar
August 7, 2013 at 10:32 AM
HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA.....Good thing your name is Kenny! ;) YOU NAUGHTY BOY! :) LOVED IT!
Ellison Avatar
August 7, 2013 at 12:06 PM
Oh my dear sweet Desert Orchid... a day without Eileen is like a day without sunshine! Hugs from the heart, dear lady! xoxoxox
Sivey Avatar
August 7, 2013 at 9:23 AM
Ha ha, you sure know how to tickle my funny bone my friend! Yeah I saw below that Drake commented that YOUR name is Jack, ha ha, yes, you might have stumbled upon something, just kidding! You are one of the kindest men here on the Soup, I really enjoy reading your poetry and your comments are always very enlightening! What a tremendous piece this one truly is, Great Work!!
Ellison Avatar
August 7, 2013 at 9:34 AM
You are a cool dude my good friend Russell! Thanks! Drake is one my favourite poets here on the Soup... so very very talented!
Tacito Avatar
August 7, 2013 at 8:35 AM
Terrific, once again!! Ha! =) But, YOUR name is Jack. So...come on man! lol =D
Ellison Avatar
August 7, 2013 at 8:42 AM
Okay Okay it's semi-biographical! LOL But I'm r-e-a-l-l-y quite a nice guy!
A   Avatar
August 7, 2013 at 7:35 AM
lol, this should be the teenage version of the story, very much enjoyed this fun read, ~always, Linda
Ellison Avatar
August 7, 2013 at 7:43 AM
Just having a little bit of fun, my dear Linda! Hugs from the heart! xoxox
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