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'j3ckp7t'

* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * ...“Sliding a dime in the hopefuls wishful slot; burning * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * Excitement spinning her lovely passions, fragrant pyre * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * Round and round and round her building fire; side to side * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * Up and down and higher and higher; delightful cries ~ * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * Beauty in sevens, now quenching, her dreams desires... * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * ,,,`Jackpot`” *

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/25/2011 10:11:00 PM
Hello Sarah,, stopping by to say hi and read this poem again... Hope you are well and enjoyed your holiday... Take care,..p.d.
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Date: 10/31/2011 10:35:00 PM
You pour the emotion into all your verse Sarah. Fascinating to read you poems. Takes me to great highs reading my dear.
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Date: 5/31/2011 7:15:00 AM
really love this wonderful poem,..appreciated much...thanks for the heartfelt comments in my poems,..such a great encouragement for me to create more heartily poems,... --junjun
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Date: 5/29/2011 9:23:00 PM
Love it!!...thank you for your kind words my friend...you are a true poet....Love, Maggie
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Date: 5/29/2011 3:25:00 PM
Sarah, your a real romantic in every way... Jackpot... hit the poem pretty good with your sweetness... you take care.. and keep charming all of us... always,..p.d.
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Date: 5/29/2011 1:33:00 PM
wow, so crafty and desirable this jackpot is..........
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Date: 5/29/2011 11:16:00 AM
A tongue teaser Hmm i like Smiles :@)
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Date: 5/29/2011 7:47:00 AM
Sweet Sarah thank you for such beautiful comments on my poetry, Im Smiling :@)
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Date: 5/29/2011 6:14:00 AM
Interesting one to come I am sure..Thanks for stopping by...I came up with the work about the wheat field the other day when we went somewhere and went through farming country...These are very large farms or farm co-op...I was just relating it to scripture from the "Bible"..Your work reads like John and your comments do also..Sara
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Date: 5/29/2011 2:48:00 AM
Sarah, Thank you for your coms on my poetry Bless Smiles :@)
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Date: 5/28/2011 9:30:00 PM
{Waiting}
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Date: 5/28/2011 6:40:00 PM
ok.
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