'j3ckp7t'

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...“Sliding a dime in the hopefuls wishful slot; burning 

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Excitement spinning her lovely passions, fragrant pyre

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Round and round and round her building fire; side to side

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Up and down and higher and higher; delightful cries ~

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Beauty in sevens, now quenching, her dreams desires... 

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,,,`Jackpot`” *
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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A   Avatar
November 25, 2011 at 10:11 PM
Hello Sarah,, stopping by to say hi and read this poem again... Hope you are well and enjoyed your holiday... Take care,..p.d.
Wesley Avatar
October 31, 2011 at 10:35 PM
You pour the emotion into all your verse Sarah. Fascinating to read you poems. Takes me to great highs reading my dear.
Villanueva Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 7:15 AM
really love this wonderful poem,..appreciated much...thanks for the heartfelt comments in my poems,..such a great encouragement for me to create more heartily poems,... --junjun
Mcafee Avatar
May 29, 2011 at 9:23 PM
Love it!!...thank you for your kind words my friend...you are a true poet....Love, Maggie
A   Avatar
May 29, 2011 at 3:25 PM
Sarah, your a real romantic in every way... Jackpot... hit the poem pretty good with your sweetness... you take care.. and keep charming all of us... always,..p.d.
Green Avatar
May 29, 2011 at 1:33 PM
wow, so crafty and desirable this jackpot is..........
Mclaughlin Avatar
May 29, 2011 at 11:16 AM
A tongue teaser Hmm i like Smiles :@)
Mclaughlin Avatar
May 29, 2011 at 7:47 AM
Sweet Sarah thank you for such beautiful comments on my poetry, Im Smiling :@)
Kendrick Avatar
May 29, 2011 at 6:14 AM
Interesting one to come I am sure..Thanks for stopping by...I came up with the work about the wheat field the other day when we went somewhere and went through farming country...These are very large farms or farm co-op...I was just relating it to scripture from the "Bible"..Your work reads like John and your comments do also..Sara
Mclaughlin Avatar
May 29, 2011 at 2:48 AM
Sarah, Thank you for your coms on my poetry Bless Smiles :@)
Poet Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 9:30 PM
{Waiting}
Mehta Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 6:40 PM
ok.
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