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Ivy's Lament

'Round and round in endless pain This silence falls like deadly rain Turn about and turn again "I love you now... I loved you? When?" The chaos breeds a bleeding chain Of doubt, regret and anger's stain A hollow promise, oozing rot "I want you now! I want you? What?" Twist and spin, the wheel of flame Engulfed in passion, mortals' game White-hot, burning, then the spark Smothers, dies and all goes dark An empty coal with hollow eyes All dressed up in pretty lies.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/22/2011 5:56:00 PM
You have a lot of talent, I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.. feel free to let me know when you have another poem up.. welcome to PS. Take care
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Date: 10/3/2011 10:55:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Anne. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 10/1/2011 6:21:00 AM
Very pretty poem. It slinks smoothly from one word to the next. Welcome to poetrysoup. And what a lovely start. <3
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