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Ivory Flakes

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Written on January 11, 2025

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gentle slivers of His muse, destined for the earth – painting a silence on the spirit with the burst of lifelike trembling, the wonder of nature’s breath poured out over the night, caressing the lasting grace with one finger who remembers what it means to love, one whisper who feels the light piercing the moments with a sense of laughter who rearranges the miracles of nature so they bleed out warmth across the twilight seas coloring each oak with a presence of joy the aching stars, withered by the snow – intimate as the glorious rhythms, guitar’s shadows reveal the intensity of lonely, forcing me to see past the silence into the peace, the serenity fading beneath the pines, intertwined – with the music who breathes like a melancholy seed, glistening with grief always knowing what it means to just believe, to see beyond the rivers of need, into the still who glows in the forests, the soothing that touches each wind, the rhythm of hope who agrees with the spirit lingering in this aching impression, the wonder unfolding, the lessons expressing what it is to sing like the wrens, to fight with the night, in the silhouettes there is a beautiful who will win, a secret who will never sin, the innocence ivory flakes, falling so they touch the notes, falling so they learn to hope, falling so they pray, like grace falling, so they’re forever amazing and, always praising – just praising… ivory flakes, crooning while in flight a silence who delights, sharing the intimacy of a spirit who can never be remembered without thinking – God is with us, He is sending love, a powerful love who destroys the darkness, silences the doubt and offers the heart room to reach out – pressing through the shadows, alive, a passion reaching beyond the suspicions, to the music of His appearing the mystery of His song carried on ivory flakes, singing all the night long, singing the notes of God’s song, capturing the rhythm of love and remembering the light whispers through the thoughts, caressing the pulsing colors blowing on winds of knowing, with God, true love is flowing and inside, our hope is growing.

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Date: 2/4/2025 8:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Pretty Picture... Have a blessed day with your win as you write away..................
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Date: 2/4/2025 6:58:00 AM
Dear Gina, your way with painting imagery is always so very artistic and emanates such warmth that touches the heart of the readers and this is no exception! I absolutely love the opening and also how you’ve written “falling so they touch the notes, falling so they learn to hope, falling so they pray, like grace falling, so they’re forever amazing and, always praising – just praising…” just so very heartfelt and has a lyrical touch to it too! Congratulations on your win! Thank you for supporting my contest!
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