Its Yesterdays Dream

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In This Slumber ******* Yesterday Exists only in Special dreams Tomorrow it will Exist in reality again Resilient and offering Delights untold expressing Answers to ease lonely tears Yesterdays that have seeking Solitude and peaceful silence ********************** Days that mask all truth Reaching for a word Esteem for you And even Me

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Karen Jones

Date: 11/21/2023 11:26:00 AM

WOW. A fantastic write! Congratulations on a win.

Speaks Volumes
Date: 11/21/2023 2:56:00 PM

Sweet Karen, your lovely comments are appreciated. Thank you from SV

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/21/2023 5:55:00 AM

Your acrostic, which resembles a fragile teardrop, is certainly exquisite. It emits a strong creative sensitivity that is worthy of the highest praise. My heartfelt congratulations on your well-deserved win dear friend.

Speaks Volumes
Date: 11/21/2023 2:55:00 PM

Thanks dear friend, sometimes my muse is on her best behavior. Every best wish, hope things are wonderful for you and you are seeing lots of that gorgeous new grandson!

Ink Empress

Date: 11/21/2023 2:53:00 AM

Wow this is absolutely gorgeous how you’ve created this acrostic in the shape of a teardrop, truly artistic and moving. Definitely a fave for me. Congratulations on your win

Speaks Volumes
Date: 11/21/2023 2:53:00 PM

Glad you like it Empress and it doesn't even rhyme. !!! Best wishes SV

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/19/2023 6:27:00 PM

Great shape and the connection of tears from the image to the poem. Enjoyed!

Speaks Volumes
Date: 11/19/2023 9:27:00 PM

Glad you liked it Kim. Thanks for letting me know, its appreciated. SV

Edward Ebbs

Date: 11/17/2023 9:07:00 PM

Thank you for sharing, I like this ~ Ed

Speaks Volumes
Date: 11/17/2023 9:54:00 PM

lol it took a while to get it the way I wanted it Ed Thanks for sharing your approval with me. I appreciate it. Cheers SV