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It's Time For a Vacay:

I have my suitcase and bag filled with cute clothes and a camera. I have a car full of my closest friends and a full tank of gas. It's time to hit the road and just drive all the way to Samara. Its a little town in Costa Rica where the wine flows like a river and the people dance until there knees grow weak! The sands are warm the drinks are strong the music bellows while people swarm. My hair thrown back my sun dress tightly tied around my neck I hook arms with my best friends as we scan the bars food racks. I have a shiver run up my neck as the foam of the ocean laps at my feet. I spot a handsome Costa Rican and give him a grin. I decide it's time that we actually meet. We dance and we dance we drink and we swim before the night's out I discover a new and burning romance. Thank you Cost Rica for my wonderful vacation I'll be sure to come back and discover a brand new sensation! Roxanna Johnson 4/20/11 Vacation contest

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Date: 5/7/2011 12:04:00 PM
wow, this place sounds really good to go visit. Best one I've read so far (well, for what I would consider a vacation!!) Congratulations.
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Date: 5/6/2011 2:35:00 PM
Creative win..SK
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Date: 5/6/2011 5:15:00 AM
thanks
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Date: 5/6/2011 3:46:00 AM
Sounds like a wonderful place, Many congrats on your BIG WIN, Roxanna. Lainie
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Date: 5/5/2011 7:25:00 PM
so descriptive, roxanna! best cheers for the super duper win..:) huggs!
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Date: 5/5/2011 5:57:00 PM
Roxanna, Have fun In Costa Rica, great to see you in the top three. Congratulations on your honored poem's success. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/5/2011 1:27:00 PM
Congrats on your 3rd Place win, Roxanna. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 5/5/2011 1:21:00 PM
Congrats Roxanna on your fantastic win in the vacation contest with this fine adventure ..enjoy luv..
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Date: 5/5/2011 12:49:00 PM
Samara sounds like a great place to spend a vacation, Roxanna. Excellent poem! Congratulations on your win in Carol's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/5/2011 12:05:00 PM
conratulations on the third place win in the contest of Carol
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Date: 5/5/2011 11:35:00 AM
Congratulations Roxanna on your 3rd place win in my "It's Time For A Vacation" contest. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/21/2011 5:15:00 AM
aww thanks (:
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Date: 4/20/2011 7:49:00 PM
Sounds like a vacation for the young..lucky you..Id be more apt to go see the flora and fauna..lol. BG
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Date: 4/20/2011 6:51:00 PM
You have made me want to pack my bags and go too !!! What a fun vacation this would be!! Great job!!
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Date: 4/20/2011 5:03:00 PM
have fun, dont drink to much booze though ancient words tells us not to be getting drunk for one, good luck with a SLENDER nice looking lad in a foreign country...sometimes we run off to meet other people when the problem is really us, but if that is not the issue, have fun when you go...
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