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Its the Blues

In the dim-lit hall where the soulful chords weep, A siren graces the stage, secrets to keep, A silhouette in moonlight's tender glow, A sexy blues singer, the crowd's hearts bestow Her voice, a velvet caress of midnight breeze, Kindling embers of passion, as she pleases, A serenade of honeyed, smoky delight, Igniting a flame in the depths of the night Curves like the bends of a winding river, Her allure, a magnetic, timeless quiver, Each sway of her hips, a sultry invitation, In her presence, hearts beat with anticipation Eyes that hold the tales of countless years, Reflecting the pain, the joy, the fears, Yet a spark of mischief, a coy, knowing grin, Unveiling a world where fantasies begin Her gown, a midnight blue, a cascading dream, Adorned with stardust, a celestial theme, Graceful and snug, it whispers and sighs, Accentuating the curves that hypnotize In the blues, she finds her solace and might, Her melody weaves through the ebony night, A storyteller of love, heartache, and sin, A temptress, a goddess, a soul deep within For in her song, a magic unfurls, A tapestry of passion, it swirls and twirls, A sexy blues singer, a living art, Captivating souls, she steals every heart 10/4/23

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Date: 12/27/2023 6:24:00 AM
I love this piece. Exceptional writing.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/5/2024 10:02:00 PM
Thank you Richard. ;)
Date: 11/9/2023 2:52:00 PM
Aloha, Brenda. I can hear the soothing cadence of her muse as its perusal intersperses magically to attentive ears. A beguiling rendering you've crafted, my friend. Cheers and Aloha, William
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/21/2023 9:22:00 AM
Aloha William and thank you!:)
Date: 10/8/2023 2:34:00 AM
She sounds like someone I can watch and listen to often (lol) Lovely write, Brenda. We've been missing you here, dear friend. Hope all is well.. hugs Charlie
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/12/2023 6:23:00 PM
Thank you Charles so nice to see you too! All is as well as can be expected!:) I’ll be Ack slowly…I just like the show of favoritism is around here! But it’s all good I’m on the RhymersBlock and have. Podcast …I went to the and I entered this into a contest here and thru hard work slowly passed Even those who had been on the app from day one! Oh one other. Thing.that was very sweet of you to say I was missed ;) His swwwdt
Date: 10/5/2023 4:22:00 PM
See you on the POTDC podium!!! :o)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/9/2023 1:35:00 PM
Arlo…I wish lol but thx!:)
Date: 10/5/2023 1:22:00 AM
Wow, this is so alluring and hypnotizing, your artistic wordsmithery is spellbinding.. I love the flow of this poem, it sounds so mellifluous with an impeccable tone and resplendent rhythm! Also, I adore so many lines here, purely whimsical "A serenade of honeyed, smoky delight", "Her gown, a midnight blue, a cascading dream, Adorned with stardust, a celestial theme"," Her melody weaves through the ebony night" Ahh, so stellar..Absolutely loved reading this, dear poetess, a fav definitely :)
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Date: 10/5/2023 12:38:00 AM
Love this
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Date: 10/5/2023 12:17:00 AM
A good poem. Well done.
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Date: 10/4/2023 11:30:00 PM
Beautiful, loved this Brenda
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