Jan Allison Poet Rhyme

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It's Snow Joke

Go to bed, Joe growled at me
Joe, I said why can’t you see
Dough like lead,  need urgently -
No brown bread for today’s tea!

Bro called Fred runs bakery
Snow wide spread, he’ll close at three
Toe goes dead  when it’s icy
So I’ll tread quite carefully!

Triple Rhyme Poetry Contest

Sponsored by Beth Evans

07/01/20

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Aditi Mishra July 16, 2020 at 9:03 AM Enjoyed this amusing tale Jan. Congratulations on your win. Blessings and love :)

James Inman July 12, 2020 at 11:04 PM Clever write Jan.

William Kelii Kekaula July 12, 2020 at 3:38 AM A jaunty write, Jan, thanks for my grin and my compliments on your placement, my friend -- Aloha from Hawaii~@William

Eric Cohen July 11, 2020 at 5:06 PM This is clever and funny. Just what I enjoy, but makes me hungry :)

Andrea Dietrich July 11, 2020 at 1:51 PM HI, Jan, and congrats on your win. How are you doing? I just don't hear from you much any more. I am worried for Caycay too. She moved to Florida and I have not heard how it went for her!!

Jenna Logan July 11, 2020 at 8:36 AM Congratulations on your lines being honored in the contest, Jan.

Joanna Daniel July 10, 2020 at 9:27 AM You wrote this one meaningfully, Jan, mine is nonsense compared to this:)

Gordon Mcconnell July 4, 2020 at 1:33 PM Nice penning Jan, so well written. Trust you are ok these days, Blessings,Gordon

Gordon Mcconnell July 4, 2020 at 1:32 PM Nice penning Jan, so well written. Trust you are ok these days, Blessings,Gordon

Panagiota Romios July 2, 2020 at 2:42 PM Superb. Best wishes Jan! I see a win coming your way Panagiota xx

Rico Leffanta July 2, 2020 at 1:52 PM Whilst mum called from the bedroom, let the dough rise? A triple threat! Aloha! Rico

Winged Warrior July 2, 2020 at 9:24 AM Great entry Jan...you make it look so easy...best wishes...love & hugs...^WW^ :o)

Regina Mcintosh July 2, 2020 at 6:57 AM Excellent write, Jan. Love it. God Bless you!

Caren Krutsinger July 2, 2020 at 3:16 AM I had no idea what a triple rhyme was, but I think I understand it now thanks to you!

Andrea Dietrich July 1, 2020 at 10:44 PM well done, Jan. THIS is a contest I need to move quickly on. I bet it was not easy!

Joseph May July 1, 2020 at 7:25 PM You did a great job with the triple rhyme Jan, best wishes

Kim Rodrigues July 1, 2020 at 6:45 PM Just a fun one! Enjoyed! Jan Allison July 1, 2020 at 6:48 PM thanks Kim its quite a challenge to write with triple rhyme:-) hugs jan xx

Tom Cunningham July 1, 2020 at 5:39 PM Wow, brilliantly composed Jan, I struggled with two. You've used your loaf on this one, groan. Good luck in the contest Tom Jan Allison July 1, 2020 at 5:45 PM I struggled with the one for Joseph - this was even more of a challenge!:-( hugs Jan xx

Eric Boddie July 1, 2020 at 5:12 PM very nice rhyming....i even like your timing....your Spirit has always shown so bright....through your words which i must say are a delight....Beautiful as usual jan....;) Jan Allison July 1, 2020 at 5:16 PM Thanks Eric:-) hugs Jan x