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Go to bed, Joe growled at me Joe, I said why can’t you see Dough like lead, need urgently - No brown bread for today’s tea! Bro called Fred runs bakery Snow wide spread, he’ll close at three Toe goes dead when it’s icy So I’ll tread quite carefully! Triple Rhyme Poetry Contest Sponsored by Beth Evans 07/01/20

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Aditi Mishra

Date: 7/16/2020 9:03:00 AM

Enjoyed this amusing tale Jan. Congratulations on your win. Blessings and love :)

James Inman

Date: 7/12/2020 11:04:00 PM

Clever write Jan.

Hilo Poet

Date: 7/12/2020 3:38:00 AM

A jaunty write, Jan, thanks for my grin and my compliments on your placement, my friend -- Aloha from Hawaii~@William

Eric Cohen

Date: 7/11/2020 5:06:00 PM

This is clever and funny. Just what I enjoy, but makes me hungry :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/11/2020 1:51:00 PM

HI, Jan, and congrats on your win. How are you doing? I just don't hear from you much any more. I am worried for Caycay too. She moved to Florida and I have not heard how it went for her!!

Jenna Logan

Date: 7/11/2020 8:36:00 AM

Congratulations on your lines being honored in the contest, Jan.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/10/2020 9:27:00 AM

You wrote this one meaningfully, Jan, mine is nonsense compared to this:)

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 7/4/2020 1:33:00 PM

Nice penning Jan, so well written. Trust you are ok these days, Blessings,Gordon

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 7/4/2020 1:32:00 PM

Nice penning Jan, so well written. Trust you are ok these days, Blessings,Gordon

Rico Leffanta

Date: 7/2/2020 1:52:00 PM

Whilst mum called from the bedroom, let the dough rise? A triple threat! Aloha! Rico

Winged Warrior

Date: 7/2/2020 9:24:00 AM

Great entry Jan...you make it look so easy...best wishes...love & hugs...^WW^ :o)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 7/2/2020 6:57:00 AM

Excellent write, Jan. Love it. God Bless you!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/2/2020 3:16:00 AM

I had no idea what a triple rhyme was, but I think I understand it now thanks to you!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/1/2020 10:44:00 PM

well done, Jan. THIS is a contest I need to move quickly on. I bet it was not easy!

Joseph May

Date: 7/1/2020 7:25:00 PM

You did a great job with the triple rhyme Jan, best wishes

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/1/2020 6:45:00 PM

Just a fun one! Enjoyed!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/1/2020 6:48:00 PM

thanks Kim its quite a challenge to write with triple rhyme:-) hugs jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/1/2020 5:39:00 PM

Wow, brilliantly composed Jan, I struggled with two. You've used your loaf on this one, groan. Good luck in the contest Tom

Jan Allison
Date: 7/1/2020 5:45:00 PM

I struggled with the one for Joseph - this was even more of a challenge!:-( hugs Jan xx

Eric Boddie

Date: 7/1/2020 5:12:00 PM

very nice rhyming....i even like your timing....your Spirit has always shown so bright....through your words which i must say are a delight....Beautiful as usual jan....;)

Jan Allison
Date: 7/1/2020 5:16:00 PM

Thanks Eric:-) hugs Jan x