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Its Raining Rainbows

It’s Raining Rainbows Rainbows rule the reigning high Radiant refractiles for the candy eye A canvas complete for the artistic dye Like a Peacock displaying its floral pie Their time is brief as they occupy Their surrendering beauty does mystify In a timeless trance we pacify Like a masters painting we glorify Their visions manifest into a lullaby Soothing songs of beauty as babes cry Backdrops for the Angels as they fly And now it is time to say “Goodbye”. Oct.23.2018 Rainbows Poetry Sponsored by: craig cornish N/A for contest

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Anisha Dutta

Date: 10/30/2018 9:25:00 AM

excellent rhythmic with precise rhymes. enjoyed each line. All the best.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/29/2018 1:13:00 PM

Very nice monorhyme...The line about the angels resonates so well. :) gw

Paul Callus

Date: 10/29/2018 11:19:00 AM

You have put the monorhyme form to good use, WW, and the topic is treated in quite an original way. Enjoyed. Regards // paul

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/29/2018 8:54:00 AM

H WW, You have created such a beautiful rainbow. I like the "monorhyme" form and you did it well. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 10/26/2018 9:32:00 AM

What a magnificent rainbow! It sings! This is a fav on my list! Good luck in the contest! Love and hugs. Pandita

Charles Messina

Date: 10/25/2018 9:21:00 PM

The last time I saw rainbows raining was when I went to a Grateful Dead Concert many moons ago (lol) Excellent write WW...You painted a wonderful picture...Love, peace and rainbows...Charlie

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/25/2018 8:36:00 AM

Love the wordings, ^WW^:)

Brandy Nicole

Date: 10/24/2018 10:43:00 PM

I love watching the rain kiss the sunshine, or the sunshine collide with the rain. For when this happens- a Rain-bow is born. Soft smile. :) Love and Colors touching the sky. ~ Brandy

Vladislav Raven

Date: 10/24/2018 4:47:00 PM

Hi John, this is an excellent light, painted with living colour. This is such a beautiful write that brings both joy and peace, as beautiful as a rainbow. Good luck in the contest. A bedazzled fave. Have a wonderful Thursday. Your friend always....Mike.