Winged Warrior Poet Monorhyme

Its Raining Rainbows

It’s Raining Rainbows


Rainbows rule the reigning high
Radiant refractiles for the candy eye
A canvas complete for the artistic dye
Like a Peacock displaying its floral pie 

Their time is brief as they occupy
Their surrendering beauty does mystify
In a timeless trance we pacify
Like a masters painting we glorify

Their visions manifest into a lullaby
Soothing songs of beauty as babes cry
Backdrops for the Angels as they fly
And now it is time to say “Goodbye”.





Oct.23.2018
Rainbows Poetry
Sponsored by: craig cornish


N/A for contest

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Anisha Dutta October 30, 2018 at 9:25 AM excellent rhythmic with precise rhymes. enjoyed each line. All the best.

Gershon Wolf October 29, 2018 at 1:13 PM Very nice monorhyme...The line about the angels resonates so well. :) gw

Paul Callus October 29, 2018 at 11:19 AM You have put the monorhyme form to good use, WW, and the topic is treated in quite an original way. Enjoyed. Regards // paul

Alexis Y. October 29, 2018 at 8:54 AM H WW, You have created such a beautiful rainbow. I like the "monorhyme" form and you did it well. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Pandita Sietesantos October 26, 2018 at 9:32 AM What a magnificent rainbow! It sings! This is a fav on my list! Good luck in the contest! Love and hugs. Pandita

Charles Messina October 25, 2018 at 9:21 PM The last time I saw rainbows raining was when I went to a Grateful Dead Concert many moons ago (lol) Excellent write WW...You painted a wonderful picture...Love, peace and rainbows...Charlie

Joanna Daniel October 25, 2018 at 8:36 AM Love the wordings, ^WW^:)

Brandy Nicole October 24, 2018 at 10:43 PM I love watching the rain kiss the sunshine, or the sunshine collide with the rain. For when this happens- a Rain-bow is born. Soft smile. :) Love and Colors touching the sky. ~ Brandy

Vladislav Raven October 24, 2018 at 4:47 PM Hi John, this is an excellent light, painted with living colour. This is such a beautiful write that brings both joy and peace, as beautiful as a rainbow. Good luck in the contest. A bedazzled fave. Have a wonderful Thursday. Your friend always....Mike.

Chris Green October 24, 2018 at 9:12 AM This was great and truly captures the complete essence and feelings when one sees a rainbow. Nicely done my friend.

Heidi Sands October 24, 2018 at 8:13 AM Perfectly written Monorhyme. Well done WW! Have a nice day :)

Mystic Rose Rose October 24, 2018 at 4:51 AM Ah, you beautiful peacock, you make me proud. Winning wishes just for you.

Andrea Dietrich October 24, 2018 at 12:12 AM very nicely done. Love that title!!

Tom Cunningham October 24, 2018 at 12:00 AM Well written W.W. One of creations beauties. Good luck. Tom.

White Wolf October 23, 2018 at 9:51 PM Beautiful, my friend. Beautiful. Best of luck to you, WW