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Its Own Flack

If I'd known, I would live to this age I'd taken better care of me Times when I walk, my hip croaks At once my knee slips~ cracks It has its own flack Then my neck pops Down I flop Saying Heck I Decide It is time Death could visit Need a bucket list A trip to Oregon first No! Mark that off~Can't do that I suffer from motion sickness That barf bag would ruin the whole day
Sponsor: Dr. Ram Mehta Contest: Nonet Form Written October 6, 2013 Croak~Making a deep sound Flack~publicity(the noise publicizes old age) Bucket List~A list of what a person wants to do before they die Barf~Vomit

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Date: 10/23/2013 8:31:00 PM
love it Sara, , awesome Nonet form :) congrats... Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 10/22/2013 10:27:00 PM
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Date: 10/21/2013 5:42:00 PM
You are so clever. Love the originality and realism. Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 10/21/2013 10:28:00 AM
Cute one, Sara! Congrats on your winning nonet! Love and blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 10/19/2013 11:50:00 AM
Clever and cute, Sara. We just have to grin and bear it. Congratultions. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/19/2013 1:43:00 AM
I loved this plain talking witty nonet. Congrats to you.
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Date: 10/18/2013 6:26:00 AM
Congrats on the win in my contest, Sara
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Date: 10/7/2013 6:28:00 PM
hahaha. you did a GREAT job here. Loved your wit.
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Date: 10/7/2013 10:10:00 AM
Hi Sara, Terrific write and form..I liked this one.. Ken
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Date: 10/6/2013 10:24:00 PM
Thanks for the entry, sara
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Date: 10/6/2013 10:15:00 PM
I agree with Linda, Oregon would be a great place to visit that is on your bucket list! This is a wonderful write, I loved reading it this evening! What a brilliant poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 10/6/2013 7:25:00 PM
I like the nonet Sara, Oregon's a nice place to put on that bucket list... good night lovely lady..Linda
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