Its Own Flack

If I'd known, I would live to this age I'd taken better care of me Times when I walk, my hip croaks At once my knee slips~ cracks It has its own flack Then my neck pops Down I flop Saying Heck I Decide It is time Death could visit Need a bucket list A trip to Oregon first No! Mark that off~Can't do that I suffer from motion sickness That barf bag would ruin the whole day
Sponsor: Dr. Ram Mehta Contest: Nonet Form Written October 6, 2013 Croak~Making a deep sound Flack~publicity(the noise publicizes old age) Bucket List~A list of what a person wants to do before they die Barf~Vomit
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

A  Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 8:31 PM
love it Sara, , awesome Nonet form :) congrats... Love ~SKAT~
A   Avatar
October 22, 2013 at 10:27 PM
Sara, . CONGRATULATIONS... XOX~ LINDA
Anglesey Avatar
October 21, 2013 at 5:42 PM
You are so clever. Love the originality and realism. Congrats on your win :)
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
October 21, 2013 at 10:28 AM
Cute one, Sara! Congrats on your winning nonet! Love and blessings, Rhonda
Johnson Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 11:50 AM
Clever and cute, Sara. We just have to grin and bear it. Congratultions. Love, Joyce
Dietrich Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 1:43 AM
I loved this plain talking witty nonet. Congrats to you.
Mehta Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 6:26 AM
Congrats on the win in my contest, Sara
Dietrich Avatar
October 7, 2013 at 6:28 PM
hahaha. you did a GREAT job here. Loved your wit.
Carroll Avatar
October 7, 2013 at 10:10 AM
Hi Sara, Terrific write and form..I liked this one.. Ken
Mehta Avatar
October 6, 2013 at 10:24 PM
Thanks for the entry, sara
Sivey Avatar
October 6, 2013 at 10:15 PM
I agree with Linda, Oregon would be a great place to visit that is on your bucket list! This is a wonderful write, I loved reading it this evening! What a brilliant poem, Great Work!!
A   Avatar
October 6, 2013 at 7:25 PM
I like the nonet Sara, Oregon's a nice place to put on that bucket list... good night lovely lady..Linda
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace