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It's Only Me - Let Me Unwind

Inside, outside... Doesn't matter where I hide Felling sorry for those who've died Can't you hear me...when I have cried In bed, In fed... Rather eat outside instead Get those feelings out of my head Isn't that...what mother said Head welt, I've knelt... Don't you know what I've been dealt I'm sure your heart would surely melt If you've felt...what I have felt Don't mind, my mind... It's not so easy for you to find When you all are in the blind It's only me...let me unwind

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Date: 7/3/2019 2:37:00 PM
This is such fun - love the way you penned and rhymed it and the words you chose make it an awesome poem Charlie! Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 7/2/2019 7:46:00 AM
Like this one, Charles. Unwinding is crucial. PANAGIOTA
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Date: 7/1/2019 7:43:00 PM
Well said in a lovely lyrical way.
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Date: 6/30/2019 4:26:00 PM
Poetry is a great way to unwind, Charlie, and i've just read an awesome one.
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Date: 6/30/2019 1:49:00 AM
G'day Charles … we all need these minutes to unwind our addled brains at times. There appears to be so much thrown at us these days - thank you Charles - Lindsay
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Date: 6/29/2019 9:08:00 PM
I like this because of the introspection in here and the heart-felt emotions Charles. Venting is always a great poem if you ask me!
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