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Placed 8th (of ten) in Robert James Liguori's True Love Contest, September 23, 2023

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So often lovely stories start when lonely ones at last say “Yes” to that last call for lonely hearts, to claim their chance at happiness. The season and their time of life was autumn when they met. These two, Ramone and Pat, had weathered strife and longed to bid the dark adieu. Each brought to the relationship vast wisdom earned through trying days. Each dealt with disappointment's grip, but now they bask in sun's bright rays. The simple things that mean so much-- October walks, a gentle kiss, a quiet meal, a loving touch-- are parts of their own special bliss. Their love and friendship keep them strong, for words and deeds go hand in hand. Each day is a delightful song, and life for them is never bland. Date: November 1, 2019 for Contest LAST CALL FOR LONELY HEARTS - Collaboration sponsored by Line Gauthier entered Strand Pick G contest on April 28, 2020 placed 2nd

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Date: 9/23/2023 4:44:00 PM
Such a lovely and awesome poem, Janice. Hearty congratulations on your contest win.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/23/2023 7:51:00 PM
Thanks so much, Lasaad. Janice
Date: 11/24/2019 2:55:00 PM
A lovely view into a positive romance, one of autumn. Good luck, Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/24/2019 7:02:00 PM
Thanks so much, Sandra. Janice
Date: 11/3/2019 6:40:00 PM
Hello Janice … nice to read a positive ballad in this negative dominated world - thanks Janice - Lindsay
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/4/2019 7:12:00 PM
Thanks so much, Lindsay. Janice
Date: 11/2/2019 7:58:00 PM
what a lovely entry for her contest, Janice. There is nothing like this kind of relationship.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/2/2019 8:35:00 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea. Janice
Date: 11/2/2019 1:59:00 PM
Janice, I like the tale of Ramone & Pat. Autumn's romance enjoyed hand in hand. Coming from a place of darkness into love's tender light. Well done. -Richard
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Date: 11/25/2019 10:19:00 AM
Back for a read on this friendship. The tale that never grows old. -R
Date: 11/1/2019 7:07:00 AM
This was really well written Janice. The flow and rhythm of this was perfect all the way through and the rhymes spot on. This poem sung itself to me, I loved everything about this. Best wishes in the contest
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/1/2019 8:17:00 AM
Chris, thanks a MILLION! Janice
Date: 11/1/2019 4:44:00 AM
A wonderful entry. Beautiful poem... Bless you, Gina
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/1/2019 8:18:00 AM
THANK YOU so much, Gina. Janice

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