Notes About The Poem

It's not complicated

Our park bench patiently awaits
a fresh november breeze delights
autumn leaves ablaze in the setting sun
~ love is a walk in the park



AP: Honorable Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Krutsinger Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 12:43 AM
I can feel the chill in the air. I am shivering, which means great job,Line.
Gauthier Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 8:26 AM
Thanks, Caren. Much appreciated.
Talbot Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 3:36 AM
Inspirational, you'll see!
Gauthier Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 5:04 AM
Yes, a lovely moment to write poetry. LOL
Rose  Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 7:45 PM
I am totally into your haikus. They are the best,
Gauthier Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 10:06 PM
Thank you so much, Pixie. Lovely comment.
One Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 9:52 AM
I see you have written a few haiku, great imagery in this one..
Gauthier Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 1:19 PM
Thanks, SO. Going through a phase...
Cunningham Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 1:51 AM
Just see the image Line, late September, leaves starting to show their autuminal beauty. With the sun setting feel the coolness' in the air. Tom
Gauthier Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 1:19 PM
LOL
Cunningham Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 9:56 AM
I'll bring the wine
Gauthier Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 9:09 AM
You got it, Tom... you and I sitting on the bench. LOL
Ashley Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 10:49 PM
Lovely atmospheric imagery, Line. An excellent Haiku!
Gauthier Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 9:09 AM
Thanks, Susan. Much appreciated.
Roper Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 10:20 PM
love the imagery
Gauthier Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 9:09 AM
Thanks, Eve. Much appreciated.
Blanca Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 10:07 PM
You captured the leaves of autumn with a few words.
Gauthier Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 9:10 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Carlos.
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