It's In the Numbers - Andrea - Hyrum

Lively “five” he shares with me,
so we get on splendidly!
Also shares my awesome “one”:
Hyrum, my grandson!


For Linda-Marie's "Magnet Marvel" Contest
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Foulk Avatar
April 16, 2011 at 4:13 PM
a great write, enjoyed reading this. thank you for commenting on if ever there was.
Reid-Hansen Avatar
April 9, 2011 at 1:30 AM
I decided to go back to my birth date to see what you wrote....I like it! Nice...short and super sweet! As for the "Bridge"...I am cautious of putting what I will be putting in my book on this site. I am still not too trusting of it for some reason. The story is 2000 words long and filled with Action, Adventure, Pain, Hope, and Death....I think you could like the complete version. Thank you as always...
Brown Avatar
March 14, 2011 at 5:48 AM
Congratulations on your win Andrea in Linda-Marie's contest "Magnet Marvel". Love, Carol
Pettit Avatar
March 13, 2011 at 7:03 PM
Congratulations on winning in the contest. Nice writing, Andrea.
Maverick Avatar
March 13, 2011 at 5:13 PM
this happy write must be worth a 7 Andrea, all the best always................!
Freeman Avatar
March 13, 2011 at 1:36 PM
Great to see you in the top ten Andrea with this honorable win in tenth place. Congratulations on your honored win. Agape, Moses
Neels Avatar
March 12, 2011 at 1:49 PM
Congratulations Andrea, tell me what does Hyrum mean? love Wilma
Skyles-Theoklapoet Avatar
March 12, 2011 at 1:25 PM
Fabulous name Hyrum.It's hard for me to have a fav.but I got 3 kids and 1 grandaughter from each but Ash is my first of 9.thanks for your very nice congrats abd your comments.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa
Locksley Avatar
March 12, 2011 at 12:43 PM
Congratulations on your win. This is a cute poem. Best to you, Diane
Poet Avatar
March 12, 2011 at 7:47 AM
Congrats Andrea on your win in the contest!--kash
Horsman Avatar
March 11, 2011 at 11:58 PM
I like this one, congrats Andrea, Harry
Johnson Avatar
March 11, 2011 at 8:01 PM
Nothing like a granchild to bring out the loving words. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Mehta Avatar
March 11, 2011 at 6:56 PM
Congratulations on the tenth place win in the contest of Linda, Andrea
Kendrick Avatar
March 11, 2011 at 4:02 PM
Congratulations..Sara
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March 11, 2011 at 3:44 PM
Congrats on this so happy write... luv Michael I loved it!!
Sweetheart Avatar
March 11, 2011 at 3:09 PM
Congrats Andrea on your success in my magnet contest with this super cool entry luv.. thankxx for your constant support always..
Babcock Avatar
March 11, 2011 at 6:29 AM
A bit of astrology thrown into this write. I am off to work at Ryan's for the day or I should say a cleaning day. Sad to hear the news about Japan. Tears for those poor folks and hope the tsunami is small when it hits N.Am. love phyl
Sweetheart Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 5:39 AM
Yahoo mail was about he pictures of Jesus .. said it was from u.. and it was so lovely .. but at first I did not receive it then yesterday it was sent again..so I figured u resent it luv.. computer craziness I guess..haha.. thankxxx I did luv it...
Neels Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 12:38 AM
Hey Andrea, yep I did know you meant the number and not his age. I also know you are a number 5 so that is the most likely conclusion I could come up with, hence me smiling while reading it :) love Wilma
K. Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 11:14 PM
sent you soupmail :D reply when you can please, super thanks :D hugs again :)
Neels Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 12:03 PM
I could not help but smile while reading this one Andrea, wish you all the best with Linda's contest :) love Wilma
K. Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 11:23 AM
this made me smile, sweetie :) how lucky for you both to share those numbers :) hugs to you -- aaack 330am I am here? I am whacked O_o what's even crazier is I posted a contest?? & I am so busy with school this month? what has gotten into me? lol hugs to you :)
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March 9, 2011 at 8:20 AM
Beautiful lines and expressions for the little one of five. He would preserve it as a token of your sweet love forever. Great entry for Linda Marie's contest. My good wishes for your grand success. Love & best wishes ...Ravindra...Andrea Dietrich
Sweetheart Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 6:40 AM
thankxx for supporting my current contest Andrea.. good luck .. reading fully at judging time.. am sure will be super amazed my friend.. as always ...
Tate Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 6:02 AM
Great, the little one will always love this.
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