It'll Show Itself

Poet's Notes

(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Emile Pinet.

Violette Poetry
Invented by Viola Gardener. It is stanzaic, rhymed, unlimited quatrains,
in the aaaB cccB and so on, feminine rhyming scheme (a rhyme that matches two or more syllables, usually at the end of respective lines, in which the final syllable or syllabication are unstressed. B is a linking rhyme from stanza to stanza. Syllables, 6,6,6,4, per line.

You would often pretend, unable to defend a girl home each weekend all by herself. You always looked depressed your feelings seemed suppressed, placing thoughts not expressed on a bookshelf. When you feel sad inside, happiness gets denied and hopes and doubts collide, damning oneself. Anxieties begin attacking you, wherein all trust withers within, blaming yourself. You doubt love does exist, although your friends insist that if you'd but persist, it'll show itself.

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/6/2018 8:28:00 AM

Well written Emile, I agree with Jesse's comment, a difficult form indeed,I wouldn't know where to start. Tom

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/6/2018 8:42:00 AM

Thanks Tom, I appreciate you friendly comments my friend, Emile.

Jesse Rowe

Date: 9/6/2018 8:17:00 AM

Wow. Color me impressed. This is quite a restrictive form with such heavy rhyming constraints and so few syllables to move from one thought to the next, but you have masterfully woven a truly heart-wrenching story with this. +FAV

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/6/2018 8:44:00 AM

Thanks so much Jesse, your words of encouragement have brought a smile to my day my friend, Emile.