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It'll Show Itself

You make light, and pretend, unable to defend a girl, home each weekend, all by herself. You're easily depressed and feelings get suppressed: placing thoughts not expressed, on a bookshelf. When one feels sad inside; fantasies get denied, and hopes and doubts collide; fooling oneself. Anxieties begin to attack you, wherein your dreams wither within: blaming yourself. You think love doesn't exist: and yet, your friends insist that if you'd but persist: it'll show itself.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 9/6/2018 8:28:00 AM
Well written Emile, I agree with Jesse's comment, a difficult form indeed,I wouldn't know where to start. Tom
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/6/2018 8:42:00 AM
Thanks Tom, I appreciate you friendly comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/6/2018 8:17:00 AM
Wow. Color me impressed. This is quite a restrictive form with such heavy rhyming constraints and so few syllables to move from one thought to the next, but you have masterfully woven a truly heart-wrenching story with this. +FAV
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Date: 9/6/2018 8:44:00 AM
Thanks so much Jesse, your words of encouragement have brought a smile to my day my friend, Emile.

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