Itching

My son is always on the wings of  hurricane
         though he breathes as a gentle breeze
         No doubt,one day his father may be uprooted
         Like a juggler he plays, not with balls, 
         but with dates and figures.

         Dad tell me about  this pact
         Dad tell me about that treaty
         Dad who were on the other side
         Dad who were they

         But his father keeps mum always 
         Why should one slip over the moss
         Silence is the panacea to switch off his libido

         That night was not unusual
          His questions paraded before a drooped head

         Reeling in the whirls of intoxication
         I dissolved my self in a peg of vodka
         Locked the dungeons of past, present and future
         Sprouted in his mother's veins

         I melted her with kisses         
         
         But somewhere in the darkness
         I could hear wriggling, groaning 
         Paws groping,jaws widening
         
         I could feel a medal swelling on my chest
         Blood is crying,sweat is gasping

         My friend, let me be frank
         That night,from head to heel
         itching snailed over me.Still scratching

         An unhealed wound is burning as an ember.

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Date: 3/13/2014 11:06:00 AM
Dear Syam The depth, depth, depth here agitates the soul. I wish I could clearly grasp in the mind what I feel in the heart. Kathy
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Date: 1/12/2014 8:10:00 PM
Powerful write.....We are all walking wounded in some way....No one is whole. The ending of this poem brought that home so well....
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Date: 1/12/2014 9:28:00 AM
I;ve read and reread this one, Syam, and still cannot arrive at complete understanding. I am so literal. Chew on me for awhile. Love, daver
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Date: 1/11/2014 9:12:00 AM
Woah fascinating! A unique topic super fun to read. Even itching is cool if it makes such a sensational poem! D metaphor is grand too.
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Date: 1/11/2014 7:09:00 AM
Thanks for sharing, Syam. A very strong yet gentle write. I like it :)
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Date: 1/11/2014 4:25:00 AM
Nice touching write Syam blended with the memories of past and thank you for your kind words on my Mulberry Poem. Love and best always..Ravindra K Kapoor.
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Date: 1/10/2014 5:21:00 PM
Very expressive work..Reads like a very unusual love affair..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 1/10/2014 12:20:00 PM
The last line is like monoku, the essence of your poem. Loved your style of painting with beautiful words to depict the same. Loved always, my friend of PS, bl
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Date: 1/10/2014 9:22:00 AM
Hello Syam, I loved reading this poem it is so full of emotion. And when you write with emotion, that's when you write the best. Nice job.....Roger
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Date: 1/10/2014 8:11:00 AM
Syam, the poem is deep, beautiful and one of the most heartfelt poems I've read. I melted her with kisses, --epic imagery. thank you for the gripping write. makes me think, how deep your emotions go. impressed. don't change anything from this poem.... hugs.... Linda
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Date: 1/9/2014 12:29:00 PM
- A well written poem and messages Syam! - Thanks for visiting on my last poem, enjoyable ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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