It Will Be a Humdinger

My last poem will be a humdinger, will include
a hummingbird in a ruby throated cowl
sipping satisfyingly in Caren’s Krutsinger’s
faerie garden - we’ll be sipping tea or something

stronger. Our muses are quite old by then,
and surely friends. One’s feigning on a daffodil.
The other’s wrinkling her teeny eyes - a scowl.

Instead of Chris Green’s good morning verse,
mine will say farewell to friends.  I don’t think

I could cut it short as a monoku but if I’m going
fast I might need to be brief. Perhaps I’d be

silent, as a lightning bug on a Summer’s day —
I’d have to have my mouth
wired shut, my hands in casts (they’d talk too)

I might say, “toodle-loo,” or “ta-ta,” if not too trite.
I’d turn out the stars and the moon, say, “good night.”

7/19/2020
If this was my last poetry contest poem Poetry Contest
Sponsor - Silent One
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Mishra Avatar
July 28, 2020 at 11:29 AM
Such a lovely and witty muse at the same time Kim! Congratulations on your win. Blessings and love :)
Rodrigues Avatar
July 28, 2020 at 6:22 PM
Thank again, Aditi, my friend! Blessings and love to you!
Roper Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 4:36 PM
Kim, congratulations on your win with these beautiful poem. Hugs Eve
Rodrigues Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 5:21 PM
Thank you, Eve!
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July 26, 2020 at 11:53 AM
Great fun to read and what a wonderful place to be in Caren's fairy garden, I have often wanted to be there too... Congrats on your win in SO's fabulous contest my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Rodrigues Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 2:55 PM
Thank you, Ann!
Pandit Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 6:16 AM
A delightful goodbye Kim--enjoyed the read--congrats on your podium win.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 2:55 PM
Thanks, Vijay!
Gauthier Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 5:50 AM
What a charming poem, Kim. I like the humor and the nod to friends. Totally delightful. Congrats on your well deserved win.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 2:54 PM
Thank you, Line!
Andresen Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 5:31 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 2:54 PM
Thanks, Anne-Lise!
One Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 2:42 AM
I am intrigued by Caren's garden, as a person who loves gardening... I will be waiting for my invite... How ironic, PS was down and this could have been the last contest for me! Congratulations on your placement in the contest
Rodrigues Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 3:34 AM
Right!? Our air conditioning went out the same day...lol. Thank you, Silent!
Krutsinger Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 11:30 PM
I am gobsmacked with pure love that you mentioned me in your LAST poem! I am truly honored and excited and loved every single piece of this. Your word choices exotic and wonderful. I cannot believe you included my first and LAST name! I am truly HONORED my friend! Thank you! You must have posted this when I could not get on the site. I had two miserable days of not being able to access Poetry Soup.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 23, 2020 at 3:36 AM
Thank you, Caren! You and me both and my air conditioning was out too! Hugs :)
Wolf Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 4:47 PM
Sounds like a cheery last hurrah to me... as long as you forget the lightning bug bit, lol... Ta-ta and By-sie, By-sie, gw
Rodrigues Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 8:01 PM
LOL!
Achilles Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 12:28 AM
That is a very very good goodbye. X
Rodrigues Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 8:01 PM
Thank you, Julie!
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