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It Was One of Those Mornings

Bad Morning It was one of those mornings’, she said Going to work found my battery dead Bus pass expired Yep, I got fired My gosh, why didn’t I just stay in bed! Good Morning I woke up this morning, aint it just great? When you get older can’t tell your fate… Jump out of bed Great day ahead Gotta go, “Healthy Aging” class at eight! 3/18/16

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Eve Roper

Date: 3/25/2016 8:45:00 PM

Barbara, congratulations on your win!!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/24/2016 9:20:00 AM

Your poem was delightful so glad that you had a good day after “It Was One Of Those Mornings” that really wasn’t awesome.. Congratulations on your placement..Sara..I hope that the healthy aging class goes really well for you with very personal healthy results..

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/23/2016 10:35:00 PM

Hi Barbara, enjoyed this one. Congratulations on your win in the contest....Vlad

Susan Gentry

Date: 3/23/2016 4:03:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement! i so enjoyed this. :)

Sandra Haight

Date: 3/18/2016 5:53:00 PM

Love it, Barbara! Two wonderful extremes. All the best for the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/18/2016 4:43:00 PM

Love the limericks Barbara. Getting fired is indeed a really bad morning. Now about this jumping out of bed... at my age, it would be a good morning if I was able to JUMP out of bed. LOL Peace young lady:)

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/18/2016 3:52:00 PM

In response to your first poem: "Why approach life ... when life can just come to you!" ... lol. These limericks are really amusing ... good luck with the Healthy Aging class!

Walter T. Ashe

Date: 3/18/2016 1:43:00 PM

You nailed these "mornings!" Let's go...class at 8! :-)

Tim Smith

Date: 3/18/2016 11:15:00 AM

Terrific Limericks BG. Keep going to those classes. An active mind and body will keep you strong.