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It Was One of Those Mornings

Woke up this morning - had a dreadful shock I had not set the alarm on my clock Swore until the air turned blue - I’d missed my job interview! My family think I’m a laughing stock Got phoned this morning everything’s fine - Was offered a job by a friend of mine Any hours I choose I simply can’t lose I’m a ‘secret shopper’ my job’s divine! Contest- it was one of those mornings. Sponsor Sara Kendrick 03~05~16
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Cheema Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 11:17 AM
A secret shopper, eh? Congrats on your win, Jan!
Allison Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 5:39 PM
total fiction lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Dutta Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 10:50 AM
Great win for the job n the poem. Congrats Jan. Love . Anisha D
Allison Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 5:39 PM
Thanks Anisha:-) hugs Jan xx
Roper Avatar
March 25, 2016 at 8:51 PM
Great job, Jan, congratulations on your win!!! Hugs Eve
Allison Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 3:40 AM
Thanks so much Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
Kendrick Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 4:29 PM
Your poem was delightful so glad that you had a good day after “It Was One Of Those Mornings” that really wasn’t awesome.. Congratulations on your placement..Sara..Wonderful that you got that job you love that is if this is based on real life..
Allison Avatar
March 25, 2016 at 7:30 AM
Pure fiction on all levels Sara - I have never overslept and have recently left my job:-( hugs jan xx
Raven Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 11:24 AM
Hi Jan, Congratulations on your win in the contest. Well, i really enjoyed the Limericks Jan. This one goes into my faves. Hugs....MIKE. XX
Allison Avatar
March 25, 2016 at 7:30 AM
Thanks so much Mike:-) hugs jan xx
Gentry Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 4:13 PM
Congratulations on your placement! Very cute!
Allison Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 4:25 PM
Thanks Susan:-) hugs Jan xx
Scars Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 3:47 PM
Jan, well done, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
Allison Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 3:49 PM
Many thanks Luloo:-) hugs Jan xx
Lane Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 12:42 PM
All's well that ends well. Well done, JAN.
Allison Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 3:49 PM
Many thanks Lin I'm glad I was able to give the poem a happy ending:-) hugs Jan xx
May Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 11:45 AM
Congrats on a fine win Jan
Allison Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 3:50 PM
Many thanks for all your support Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx
Haight Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 8:48 AM
Nice mornings' contrast, Jan. Love it! Congrats on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 3:48 PM
Many thanks Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx
Mcconnell Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 3:26 AM
nice one Jan, yes I hate being late for anything as I just start to panic making me more stressed even than usual, well done, blessings, Gordon
Allison Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 3:23 PM
Thanks for dropping by Gordon:-) hugs Jan xx
Black Blacharczyk Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 3:11 PM
Well written. Put a smile on my face. I enjoyed it because I didn't know where it would take me. Nice ending
Allison Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 4:35 PM
Thanks for dropping by Frank:-) hugs Jan xx
Callus Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 2:27 PM
Very witty, Jan:) I too hate being late, thus I'm usually extra early, and I don't rely on alarm clocks, they give you a false sense of security! hugs // paul
Allison Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 4:34 PM
I tend to set and my mobile just in case we suffer a power cut lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Shahein Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 1:17 PM
Very great write my dear , I was glad to read it , hugs / / :) dalia
Allison Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 4:33 PM
Thanks Dalia:-) hugs Jan xx
Rigoler Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 1:30 PM
I've overslept many a morning for work. Thankfully, my boss was very tolerant. Thanks for reading about Fanny. What does it mean to you British? Best wishes in the contest. / M
Allison Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 3:37 PM
I have never overslept Maurice I hate the thought of oversleeping. will soup mail you:-) hugs jan xx
Vaso Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 11:08 PM
Wow, you kinda good looking gal, I wish I was your alarm clock! :) hugs
Allison Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 11:48 PM
I wish lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Simpson Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 8:41 PM
Quite a turn-around!.....Good luck in the contest Jan.
Allison Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 11:49 PM
Thanks Carlene:-) hugs Jan xx
May Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 7:50 PM
Very nice limerick Jan..best wishes in the contest
Allison Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 11:50 PM
Thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 7:19 PM
Jan,. your first part is much like mine!! (if I ever get it posted). Trying hard to do comments but it's dire here!! I am really enjoying contests such as Sara's.
Allison Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 11:47 PM
Yes I enjoyed the challenge too:-) hugs Jan xx
Gorelick Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 5:31 PM
Ive always wanted to be a secret shopper..lucky you!,This is cute! BG
Allison Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 5:33 PM
Just a fiction write for the contest Barbara lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Horsman Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 5:22 PM
Excellent Jan, your humour comes streaming through..good luck in the contest..
Allison Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 5:29 PM
Thanks Harry a pet hate of mine is being late:-) hugs Jan xx
Turner Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 4:57 PM
Love the humor, Jan. I remember reading somewhere,"Being late is saying your time is more important than the person who waited on you." Peace my dear:)
Allison Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 5:01 PM
Thanks ... I like that saying Daniel:-) I hate being late - I find it most inconsiderate and if I have to wait in for someone and they don't turn up - arghhhhhhhh it drives me mad lol:-( hugs Jan xx
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 4:14 PM
What a great entry Jan! There is no worse panicky feeling than waking up late. Good luck in the contest. ; )
Allison Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 4:16 PM
Thanks Connie - I always have the alarm set on my mobile too just in case the power ever goes off - I detest being late for anything:-) hugs jan xx
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