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Woke up this morning - had a dreadful shock I had not set the alarm on my clock Swore until the air turned blue - I’d missed my job interview! My family think I’m a laughing stock Got phoned this morning everything’s fine - Was offered a job by a friend of mine Any hours I choose I simply can’t lose I’m a ‘secret shopper’ my job’s divine! Contest- it was one of those mornings. Sponsor Sara Kendrick 03~05~16

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Date: 3/26/2016 11:17:00 AM
A secret shopper, eh? Congrats on your win, Jan!
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Date: 3/27/2016 5:39:00 PM
total fiction lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/26/2016 10:50:00 AM
Great win for the job n the poem. Congrats Jan. Love . Anisha D
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Date: 3/27/2016 5:39:00 PM
Thanks Anisha:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/25/2016 8:51:00 PM
Great job, Jan, congratulations on your win!!! Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/26/2016 3:40:00 AM
Thanks so much Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/24/2016 4:29:00 PM
Your poem was delightful so glad that you had a good day after “It Was One Of Those Mornings” that really wasn’t awesome.. Congratulations on your placement..Sara..Wonderful that you got that job you love that is if this is based on real life..
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Date: 3/25/2016 7:30:00 AM
Pure fiction on all levels Sara - I have never overslept and have recently left my job:-( hugs jan xx
Date: 3/24/2016 11:24:00 AM
Hi Jan, Congratulations on your win in the contest. Well, i really enjoyed the Limericks Jan. This one goes into my faves. Hugs....MIKE. XX
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Date: 3/25/2016 7:30:00 AM
Thanks so much Mike:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 3/23/2016 4:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement! Very cute!
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Date: 3/23/2016 4:25:00 PM
Thanks Susan:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/22/2016 3:47:00 PM
Jan, well done, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Date: 3/22/2016 3:49:00 PM
Many thanks Luloo:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/22/2016 12:42:00 PM
All's well that ends well. Well done, JAN.
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Date: 3/22/2016 3:49:00 PM
Many thanks Lin I'm glad I was able to give the poem a happy ending:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/22/2016 11:45:00 AM
Congrats on a fine win Jan
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Date: 3/22/2016 3:50:00 PM
Many thanks for all your support Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/22/2016 8:48:00 AM
Nice mornings' contrast, Jan. Love it! Congrats on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/22/2016 3:48:00 PM
Many thanks Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/11/2016 3:26:00 AM
nice one Jan, yes I hate being late for anything as I just start to panic making me more stressed even than usual, well done, blessings, Gordon
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Date: 3/11/2016 3:23:00 PM
Thanks for dropping by Gordon:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/10/2016 3:11:00 PM
Well written. Put a smile on my face. I enjoyed it because I didn't know where it would take me. Nice ending
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Date: 3/10/2016 4:35:00 PM
Thanks for dropping by Frank:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/8/2016 2:27:00 PM
Very witty, Jan:) I too hate being late, thus I'm usually extra early, and I don't rely on alarm clocks, they give you a false sense of security! hugs // paul
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Date: 3/10/2016 4:34:00 PM
I tend to set and my mobile just in case we suffer a power cut lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/8/2016 1:17:00 PM
Very great write my dear , I was glad to read it , hugs / / :) dalia
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Date: 3/10/2016 4:33:00 PM
Thanks Dalia:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/6/2016 1:30:00 PM
I've overslept many a morning for work. Thankfully, my boss was very tolerant. Thanks for reading about Fanny. What does it mean to you British? Best wishes in the contest. / M
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Date: 3/6/2016 3:37:00 PM
I have never overslept Maurice I hate the thought of oversleeping. will soup mail you:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 3/5/2016 11:08:00 PM
Wow, you kinda good looking gal, I wish I was your alarm clock! :) hugs
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Date: 3/5/2016 11:48:00 PM
I wish lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/5/2016 8:41:00 PM
Quite a turn-around!.....Good luck in the contest Jan.
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Date: 3/5/2016 11:49:00 PM
Thanks Carlene:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/5/2016 7:50:00 PM
Very nice limerick Jan..best wishes in the contest
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Date: 3/5/2016 11:50:00 PM
Thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/5/2016 7:19:00 PM
Jan,. your first part is much like mine!! (if I ever get it posted). Trying hard to do comments but it's dire here!! I am really enjoying contests such as Sara's.
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Date: 3/5/2016 11:47:00 PM
Yes I enjoyed the challenge too:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/5/2016 5:31:00 PM
Ive always wanted to be a secret shopper..lucky you!,This is cute! BG
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Date: 3/5/2016 5:33:00 PM
Just a fiction write for the contest Barbara lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/5/2016 5:22:00 PM
Excellent Jan, your humour comes streaming through..good luck in the contest..
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Date: 3/5/2016 5:29:00 PM
Thanks Harry a pet hate of mine is being late:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/5/2016 4:57:00 PM
Love the humor, Jan. I remember reading somewhere,"Being late is saying your time is more important than the person who waited on you." Peace my dear:)
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Date: 3/5/2016 5:01:00 PM
Thanks ... I like that saying Daniel:-) I hate being late - I find it most inconsiderate and if I have to wait in for someone and they don't turn up - arghhhhhhhh it drives me mad lol:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/5/2016 4:14:00 PM
What a great entry Jan! There is no worse panicky feeling than waking up late. Good luck in the contest. ; )
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Date: 3/5/2016 4:16:00 PM
Thanks Connie - I always have the alarm set on my mobile too just in case the power ever goes off - I detest being late for anything:-) hugs jan xx

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