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It Was One of Those Mornings

 
The snow is falling fast, raging pure white, the car is buried. Winter weather warning, shut down of public transport, the power is out and stores closed. It was one of those winter mornings, only the neighbours dog was enjoying. It was a delightful . . . beautiful day, the sun was shining, flowers blooming, birds singing sweetly, bees buzzing, blue butterflies were drifting, and squirrels were searching. I felt like dancing, must rise and shine. Oh sweet cat, in the, sun. ____________________________ March 4, 2016 Poetry/Etheree/It Was On Of Those Mornings Copyright Protected, ID 16-764-000-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, It Was One Of Those Mornings, sponsor, Sara Kenrick Fifth Place
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Roper Avatar
March 25, 2016 at 8:24 PM
Congratulations on your win, Broken! Hugs Eve
La France Avatar
March 25, 2016 at 9:12 PM
Eve, thanks so much for the congratulations !
Warrior Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 10:00 AM
Congrats Wings...well deserved my friend...god bless...^WW^
La France Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 12:38 PM
Winged, thanks so much for the congrats !
Kendrick Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 8:56 AM
Your poem was delightful so glad that you had a good day after “It Was One Of Those Mornings” that really wasn’t awesome.. Congratulations on your placement..Sara..Just love the pictures that you chose..
Kendrick Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 9:33 AM
You are quite welcome..I have started a new contest if you care to check it out..Sara
La France Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 9:07 AM
Sara, thanks so much for that wonderful contest, and for my great placement, I love those pics also !
Raven Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 10:12 PM
Hi Constance, Congratulations on your win in the contest. I do Love the content, the piece is well crafted. The words just flowed from start to finish. This was an enjoyable read. This is going into my faves and i have to give another beautiful write a seven....MIKE.
La France Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 8:44 AM
Mike, thanks for the congratulations, the fav and the 7, and the lovely comment, appreciate !
Quigley Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 6:16 PM
Nice, and beautifully rendered!
La France Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 6:46 PM
Tom thanks for visiting with the beautiful !
Gentry Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 3:42 PM
Congratulations on your win with this creative entry! Enjoyed it.
La France Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 4:53 PM
Susan, thanks for much for the congratulations, appreciate !
Scars Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 3:46 PM
Broken Wings, this is lovely, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
La France Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 12:51 PM
Laura, thanks for visiting with the lovely !
Lane Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 12:38 PM
These were done quite well in content and form. Congratulations, BW.
La France Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 1:06 PM
Lin, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations !
Haight Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 8:46 AM
I enjoyed your lovely contrast of two mornings, Broken Wings. Congrats on your placement. Hugs, Sandra
La France Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 1:12 PM
Sandra, thanks for the compliment and the congrats and the hugs !
Inman Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 11:12 AM
What a contrast, nice use of form, double Etherees are great for showing contrast especially when one is reversed. Very well done, BW.
La France Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 12:00 PM
James, thanks for visiting with the comment and the compliment ...
Beaufort Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 2:55 PM
The animals are such inspiration. Very cute and such symmetry.
La France Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 6:46 PM
Duke, thanks for visiting my poem, so appreciated !
Simpson Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 8:44 PM
Give me the latter morning please!!....Good luck in the contest
La France Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 11:44 PM
Carlene, thanks for visiting, yes, me too, I am buried in snow at the moment, and thanks for the encouragement, appreciate !
Dietrich Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 7:15 PM
Wonderful. I had a different kind of contrast, sleepless night vs. well rested, but THIS is the other contrast I would certainly do myself!!!
La France Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 11:48 PM
Andrea, thanks for visiting with the wonderful, I am looking forward to reading your theme !
Scars Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 10:12 AM
I love this because here in Michigan, we are getting so much unwanted snow! We have over 2 inches right now and it's still falling! I can't wait to wake up like you did in your second etheree! Something to look forward to I guess! -good luck in the contest! -luloo *smiles*
La France Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 3:21 PM
Laura, thanks for visiting, we have tons of snow here in Ontario also, spring is around the corner the weather people keep saying, and then we can enjoy bright sunny mornings ~
A   Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 4:18 AM
Awesome
La France Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 3:40 PM
Linda, thanks for visiting with the awesome !
Ashe Avatar
March 4, 2016 at 2:52 PM
Broken Wings, I know the snow!!!....and the cat is in a heaven that isn't numbered! :-) Go Write On!
La France Avatar
March 4, 2016 at 3:42 PM
Walter, thanks for visiting my poem, appreciate !
Heemstra Avatar
March 4, 2016 at 10:32 AM
I enjoyed the read! I'll take the sun over the snow any day! Good luck with the contest!
La France Avatar
March 4, 2016 at 1:40 PM
Robert, thanks for visiting with the comment, me too, give me the sun any day, so sick of the snow ~
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